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by swguy123
Mon Jan 10, 2022 12:24 pm
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Re: Narrative preferences (voice and POV)

I have sent you a private message with some thoughts/ideas for your story.
by Executionus
Mon Jan 10, 2022 1:27 pm
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Re: Narrative preferences (voice and POV)

I've used all of the POV options by this point. It's not that one style is the best overall, it's that the different styles have different specialties and I use whichever POV style I feel works best for the story itself. For example, I always use 3rd person if it's a story with a large cast and mult...
by Debbifan
Mon Jan 10, 2022 4:08 pm
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Re: Narrative preferences (voice and POV)

You asked what readers here would most enjoy. Easy answer. I've read and enjoyed stories written from all POVs. For a first story, which I think you imply this will be, I would recommend writing it how it comes most easily and naturally to you. Concentrate on the story and not the mechanics at this ...
by ChubbyChaser73
Mon Jan 31, 2022 5:05 am
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Re: Good friends help drunk friends … get naked.

This was an excellent story. I really want a sequel showing how the girls treat Mike afterwards (do they really think the world of him?) and if the main character develops any feelings for him. Did he cry himself to sleep? Will he be shunned and sneered at? Will he retreat even more into himself? Wi...
by swguy123
Tue Feb 01, 2022 2:13 pm
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Re: Good friends help drunk friends … get naked.

Great first story, I really like your writing style. I enjoyed the setting, I like the dynamic between university flatmates. I just wished the actual exposure part was a bit longer. Looking forward to more work from you!
by ChubbyChaser73
Fri Feb 04, 2022 9:03 pm
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Re: Good friends help drunk friends … get naked.

Huge thanks for the encouragement and ideas guys. I've been giving it a lot of thought and think I have an idea moving forward which you can hopefully all get on board with! You can expect a positive twist in the tale that will reveal that things possibly weren't as cruel or as traumatic as they fi...
by stripic
Sat Mar 19, 2022 4:41 am
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The perks of being a tomboy

I was always a tomboy and was frequently mistaken for a boy when I was younger. So it wasn't super uncommon for me to witness pantsings, flashings, moonings, or other embarrassing things boys don't usually do in front of girls. One that really stood out was at my high school crush's graduation party...
by littl1p
Thu Mar 24, 2022 6:36 am
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Life of humiliation

I was unfortunately cursed/blessed with a medically diagnosed micropenis. My dr. didn't diagnose me at birth like most of the other .06% of guys with the same issue. She told my mom that although I was abnormally small she had hope that it would grow as I aged. She did talk to my mom abut testostero...