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by Executionus
Sun Mar 21, 2021 5:43 pm
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Re: Amy’s Life... Part One (Part Three D Available Now)

No fair, I was promised this part was in 3D!

Fun story so far. I can speak from experience how slaughtered the little girls would be for cutting my long hair though. They would beg for a death that never came. Makes me wonder what vengeance will head their way.
by Executionus
Mon Mar 22, 2021 3:23 am
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The Thirst Games -- (Part 38) Epilogues

*Part 38 Epilogues Skater [/u] She was less shy than most of the girls, but was still quite bummed about getting beat up and stripped bareass by Bully. The whole part of being pushed down the hallway on her own skateboard was absolutely mortifying to her. And then in the finals she tried to cheer o...
by Executionus
Wed Mar 24, 2021 8:54 pm
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Re: Amy’s Life... Part One (Part Three E Available Now)

Well this just keeps getting better and better.
by Executionus
Thu Mar 25, 2021 4:48 am
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The Passion of Jessica Christ

(Prompt #5: Protagonist embarrassed on stage in a play. This will be done in 5 Acts following traditional dramatic format. This is what I honestly think is the first Easter story in the history of these boards and is a story outline that I've wanted to make real for years.) Act 1: The Exposition [/u...
by Executionus
Fri Mar 26, 2021 1:33 am
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The Passion of Jessica Christ -- Act 2

Act 2: Rising Action [/u] The intro to the play was very cryptic, but I hid my fear as I continued to speak to my listeners. I wanted to open the play with hope, so I spoke about Heaven and how it was open to all men and women who wished to enter it. I felt that I was doing well, but it didn't take...
by Executionus
Sat Mar 27, 2021 1:42 am
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Re: sarah the shy exhibitionist First attempt at a story-criticism welcome.

I see your story as more of an outline than a full complete story, which is not a bad thing in itself because it's a very good outline. The action moves so quickly though and without dialogue or heavy details, which is why it feels more like just an outline. What I liked was that the entire focus of...
by Executionus
Sat Mar 27, 2021 8:04 am
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The Passion of Jessica Christ - Act 3

Act 3: The Climax [/u] Judy Iscariot just kissed me on the cheek. Before I even had time to respond, Roman guards swarmed me and grabbed my arms, roughly pulling me forward. I had no hope of escape, these guys held me tightly. The scene change behind me was masterful, and even in my dragged state I...
by Executionus
Sat Mar 27, 2021 11:23 pm
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The Passion of Jessica Christ - Act 4

Act 4: Falling Action [/u] Pontius Phyllis then ordered "Normally we would have the condemned carry their own crosses to the hill, but with this tiny little thing that could take days. I'll order the rookies to move it. You boys here should carry HER to the hill instead." As soon as I hea...
by Executionus
Sun Mar 28, 2021 5:27 am
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The Passion of Jessica Christ - Act 5

Act 5: Resolution [/u] I woke up backstage. I was lying on the ground, wrapped up in a thick blanket, very dizzy and unsure of what was going on. Some of my classmates were there with me in tears. I couldn't see straight or think straight. I could hear the narrator on the stage describing the buria...
by Executionus
Mon Mar 29, 2021 12:43 pm
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Re: Random ramblings and updates from SDS - 1

Sounds like a fun time!

I'd recommend changing names in one universe though to avoid confusion. RevengedPirate often uses the same names in multiple different stories and sometimes this makes it difficult to remember which events happened in which story when new updates drop.