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Authors note: Whatever system, they have that logged me out more than once midway and effectively deleted multiple drafts! You'll understand my frustration with the process, I hope, but I'll try a few more times. Also, this part may come off as mostly a monologue, but I couldn't think of anything ...

Using it on those who deserve it is what the aunt instructed... Mason and most of the other swimmers probably didn't deserve it... Is their going to be a karmatic backlash for misusing the magic I wonder...

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Louise added they could use it with Mason if it was just the two of them and they weren't publicly embarrassing him when Kerry used the phone with the swim team and first found what it could do she was experimenting with I thought about a karma backlash but decided her aunt wouldn't do that ...

Was the original author Krylb and you changed the names and ages because if not... this is suspiciously similar to another story. Yes I know you stated at the beginning you had permission but... just saying

From the OP it appeared to me that "Amy - Losing Control" was the original title and you were continuing a story named that. Meaning that the person you got permission from may have been the plagiarist if it were another, which is why I mentioned the original author's name. I did not mean to offend ...