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by Trundle
Fri Oct 20, 2023 2:26 pm
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Re: Nurse's Association of Knowledge, Education and Demonstration (New Oct 20)

Well like I said as much as I enjoyed the last few chapters where Seth wasn't the main focus, and I really did enjoy them, I was really looking forward to getting back to him in this chapter and it was even better than I hoped for.

I really like how you take your times and take things slowly ...
by Trundle
Fri Oct 20, 2023 2:41 pm
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Re: It's In the Script

This is a brilliant development for the story because now Stian is stuck.

Previously you could maybe read a chapter and think well why can't Stian just say no to these obscene requests if he's so uncomfortable about it but this latest chapter has made it all make so much sense now. He can't refuse ...
by Trundle
Thu Oct 26, 2023 12:08 am
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Re: Halloween Horrors: Story two, The Marble Statue_ New 10/25

I had to go back and read the whole story again to remind myself of where we were up to in the story.

I really really like it, having the protagonist be a girl who slowly gets more and more depraved and does darker things to get what she wants is a really unique way to tell a story. The Marsha we ...
by Trundle
Sun Oct 29, 2023 2:43 pm
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Re: Nurse's Association of Knowledge, Education and Demonstration (New Oct 20)

Delighted to see this story back! I was worried as it had been a week without an update so what a nice surprise to see the saga continues :D

I think I correctly predicted it was Clementine walking in last time so I'm happy I was right. Another fantastic chapter, I really like how Seth knows how ...
by Trundle
Tue Oct 31, 2023 9:50 pm
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Re: Halloween Horrors: Story two, The Marble Statue_ New 10/31

Really enjoying how spooky you've managed to make the whole thing. It really does feel fitting for Halloween!

Can't wait to hear how Marsha strips this Tobar, slow and sensual or quick as possible?

Hopefully we get part b soon, will this story return next year or carry on for a while longer i ...
by Trundle
Tue Oct 31, 2023 10:47 pm
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Re: Nurse's Association of Knowledge, Education and Demonstration (New Oct 31)

Another simply brilliant chapter. Nothing super revolutionary may have happened but I loved the backstory and getting to see events from different POVs, it adds so much more to the story. Hopefully it's a technique you use again at some point.

This was actually a tense read, the tension was close ...
by Trundle
Thu Nov 02, 2023 10:24 am
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Re: Nurse's Association of Knowledge, Education and Demonstration (New Nov. 2)

Always a joy to see a new chapter has been posted and this was no different. This is maybe the most humiliated and angry we've seen Seth so I loved it. Or should I say the most humiliated and angry we've seen Seth so far...

Before the notes at the bottom I was definitely getting the impression ...
by Trundle
Thu Nov 02, 2023 9:13 pm
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Re: Nurse's Association of Knowledge, Education and Demonstration (New Nov. 2)



Or should I say the most humiliated and angry we've seen Seth so far...

Just wait 'till "phase 2" ;)


Now I'm thinking if Joseph doesn't have a weird crush on his brother why is he doing this? Is it some deep seated resentment to Seth?

Joseph may wrestle with that very question himself ...
by Trundle
Thu Nov 02, 2023 9:33 pm
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Re: Halloween Horrors: Story two, The Marble Statue_ New 11/02

Another brilliantly written chapter. Manages to be both erotic and genuinely unsettling, especially the presence of Toba's Mother sat in the corner watching all this unfold.

I feel like Leopold and Lacie, hanging on every word Marsha says as she tells the story !
by Trundle
Sat Nov 04, 2023 12:28 pm
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Re: Halloween Horrors: Story two, The Marble Statue_ New 11/04

Really enjoyed this chapter.

I am really enjoying the truth or dare game and the dynamics between Marsha and her cousins but this story told by Marsha was amazing. It managed to be both erotic and creepy at the same time with neither aspect diluting the other. What a mad story.

I wonder if telling ...