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Of course, in the UK, hockey means field hockey. And it's a game associated with girls at school. Indeed, there is a type of schoolgirl story called "jolly hockey sticks". What the girls got up to in the showers, I never found out.

I do like stories where the protagonist learns to accept their nudity and starts enjoying it.

Well, technically, remembering my O-level biology from many years ago, the vagina is the sheath from the vulva to the womb, the vulva is the external visible part. (Well, OK, visible vulvas are not that common in the street.) For some, the term vulva is too formal, whereas pussy is more what someone ...

A bit of advice. You really should decide whether you are writing in the present tense or the past tense. Mixing them up just causes confusion.

I think this is what's called a toxic relationship.

I do hope there's more to come.

It is apparent that Mina is now enjoying being naked. I actually prefer CNF (Confident Nude Female) to ENF.

I can't help feeling that is going to be a rocky marriage.

Personally, I prefer blatant exhibitionism. She strips because she wants to.

So I guess my feeling is, don't post something with a cliffhanger unless you have the next chapter (almost) ready to not leave people hanging. But at the same time, I wouldn't want someone to create a big backlog of new content because they're stuck with an existing tale. I'll live. :D


I have ...