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Chapter 2

Bella had written down her address and given it to Alice. Both women had decided that it would be too soon to try the bus, after the accident, so they ended up taking a taxi to the apartment.

Once they had arrived, Bella insisted that Alice accompany her in. Only when the door was ...

Chapter 3

Considering how small the apartment was, the bathroom was quite large. There were two doors, kitty-corner to one another. One led to the living room and the other to the bedroom. To the left was a separate compartment where the toilet was located and to the right was the sink and bathroom ...

Oh, very nice. Appreciate the heads up!

How do I feel about female characters who are compulsively submissive? When it's the main character, it's literally my favourite! My favourite stories are about protagonists who are very submissive. The more submissive, the better. I was hoping that's the ...

Write what comes naturally to you. You'll be at your best when you don't need to think about the style you are writing in. For me, some stories work best in first person and others in third/limited. What I try to avoid is using blatant exposition. Find a way to work it into the story organically ...

You have to watch out for infodumps, as the device is known describing science fiction stories. "As you know, professor,,," There's an author I read once, who, near the end of a novel. spends two pages explaining how to fight a space battle. And this was not even a character explaining it, it ...

I agree, I prefer either when a girl humiliates another girl, or when a girl is forced to make a Faustian bargain due to her own decisions that lead to her humiliating herself...

It can work when the male humiliates the female, but the author has to work hard to keep it from feeling like a SA

I've heard that in Japan, women spend a lot of time nude in public baths, so for modesty they keep their bushes full as a natural underwear. So they may be more inclined to cover their breasts and leave their bush to the wind.

I really want to write more, but my work situation has completely sapped my creative energy. I am about half way through the next chapter of 3 different stories, but I have not been able to bring any of them home. Hopefully things settle down soon and I can get some things closed out.