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I'd like to thank management. for stopping the (guest writers) ? from commenting. personnally i admire you the writers for having the imagination and the bravery to post them. i dont have either, luckily i do enjoy alot of stories. wasn't a fan of unknown people critising whithout reason or construc...

This is a gender swap story that someone suggested for me a few months back. I have always been a bit hesitant to post because it is very close to the original story "Tommy's Debasement" written by Blondie. Everybody is over the age of 18 though. I hope it's okay.... It was supposed to be ...

April could hear significant snickering already from the class before she even stepped out. With butterflies in her stomach April poked her red face out and saw the faces of 35 students mixed male and female staring back at her. She quickly retreated back inside leaning her back against the wall tak...

Chapter 1 Bethany Samuels had been excited for the upcoming year. It was her first time as part of the Sigma Delta Phi leadership circle. It was a part of the sorority that was reserved for upperclassmen and was in charge of the hazing rituals done on the freshman rushing the sororities. The hazing...

Chapter 2 “What the HELL were you thinking?” Meghan shouted as Bethany was sitting on the couch, Lindsay curled in a ball, crying. Bethany said. “I thought it’d make you happy. You’re the one who wanted to make hazings more exciting.” “I meant like a water balloon fight or something not to fucking ...

Chapter 3 While Lindsay had only suffered a few hours in the morning since Bethany had tied her up late at night, Bethany was not so fortunate as Meghan left her tied up in the middle of the day just as everyone was waking up. The worst was unknown to Bethany as she had forgotten one crucial part o...

My view on descriptions is that if you're not putting effort into your descriptions, you're not doing it right, just rattling off "here's X, they are this tall and this busty" it essentially a speed bump, you're slowing your story down to give the reader a solid mental image of your charac...

This even kinda gets to a pet peeve of mine in some stories, unless what you're writing is essential to the meat of the story, why is it there? And more often than not, it just feels like writers put a long pre-amble in there because it "feels realistic", when in fact it just makes your s...

The way you handled the story till the end is very awesome. Looking forward to the next part.
Also the fear of getting naked as hostage can be a better idea for your next story.

Wonderful story! Your writing style is superb and kept me riveted throughout the entire post. I am eagerly looking forward to see what happens next.

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