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by Fred Key
Wed Jun 07, 2023 6:28 pm
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Re: The Tutor (new post 6/7)

I took the slip from Jess and opened it, then read it aloud. CLOSE YOUR EYES. REACH INTO THE FRIDGE. WHATEVER YOU PULL OUT GOES DOWN THE FRONT OF YOUR TOPMOST PIECE OF CLOTHING.

Again, I looked over at Tara. "Another messy penalty? I thought you said you thought they were childish." She shook her ...
by Fred Key
Sat Jun 10, 2023 4:10 am
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Summer Contest 2023 - Collateral Damage

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Collateral Damage

A story by Fred (edited slightly 6/10)


It is a truth universally acknowledged that in any small group of friends, there will be one person who is “the nice one.”

It is a truth equally well-acknowledged that “the nice one ...
by Fred Key
Thu Jun 15, 2023 4:19 pm
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A Small Price To Pay (Poll-what happens next?)

Thank you all for the kind welcome and the support for "The Tutor". I know it had less ENF and more other to it than many people might prefer, but it wasn't written for this site originally, and I wanted to know a little more about how my particular type of storytelling would be received here ...
by Fred Key
Fri Jun 16, 2023 4:48 pm
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Re: A Small Price To Pay (Ch. 2 6/16)

Chapter 2 - Reversal of Fortune

The Truth or Dare game had gone pretty much as Ryan had hoped. It was clear from early on that the girls were ganging up on him, as he was the recipient of almost every other question or dare. Ryan had decided that the right way to play it was to be “reluctant” about ...
by Fred Key
Sun Jun 18, 2023 1:40 am
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Re: How to Write?

This is a very interesting set of answers. The variety of approaches is always going to make it hard for people to answer this question, but here’s my two cents:

I usually try to think of a situation that will permit what I want to happen to happen in the most believable way possible. That’s not ...
by Fred Key
Tue Jun 20, 2023 5:42 am
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Re: A Small Price To Pay (Ch. 2 6/16))

Chapter 3 - The pain you know

Sarah was still moaning “OW! OW! OH!” and desperately rubbing her flaming backside a minute after Ryan had let her up from his lap. Her pajama pants and pink panties were still in a puddle around her ankles, and the only concession she made to modesty was to turn away ...
by Fred Key
Wed Jun 21, 2023 9:30 pm
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Re: A Small Price To Pay (Ch. 3 6/20))

Chapter 4 - Strength can be a Weakness

Jessica had grown up as an Army brat, and had moved many times over the years. She had no problems making friends with her winning smile and upbeat nature, and since she wasn’t the sort of girl who was interested in makeup and attracting attention, the cliques ...
by Fred Key
Wed Jun 21, 2023 9:42 pm
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Re: A Small Price To Pay (Ch. 3 6/20))

OK, short pause here. It's taking a bit longer for me to get through this opening round of punishments before we get to some ENF gamey fun, and I am a bit worried that this is too drawn out even for one of my stories. On the plus side, I've been able to write more over the past few weeks, which is ...
by Fred Key
Thu Jun 22, 2023 7:34 pm
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Re: Behind Her Eyes (Complete)

This was very well done. I appreciate the senses being used as focal points for each section, and while
I would have loved to see a little more of this world you created, the ENF portion is the focus here and it was executed nicely. Zoe’s moments of panic were great!
by Fred Key
Tue Jun 27, 2023 12:00 am
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Re: A Small Price To Pay (Ch. 4 posted 6/21, plus author note)

Ch. 5 - Surprises

Although Annie was the tallest of the girls, she was still a good 2 inches shorter than Ryan. Even so, they were closer to eye level than he was with any of the others. Her eyes were already brimming with tears.

“Please, Ryan,” she begged. “I know you’re going to…to spank me…but ...