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Excited to see what the next game is

Same here. Curious as to who the next loser(s) might be and I wonder how far Liz agreed to go for the sake of getting back at the other three.

I like the concept and the flow as well as the impulse towards going into great detail. I can tell these themes are meaningful to you. But the incoherence of AI generated text makes it a bit of a slog. Details like Anna's eye color and the color of her leg hair are inconsistent, and there's a lot of ...

Character profile - Oliver

Somehow the most well adjusted of the group. He is a geek but owns it. He loves everything sci-fi, super hero and gaming related. Massive board game and TCG nerd and doesn't really care who knows it. He is a fairly above average student in his studies but nothing like ...

You're awesome at writing! This is taking a great turn and I like it!

This story is to relationship dynamics what Jackie Chan is to choreography. Perfectly captured both sides of the yin-yang. A guy telling the girl what to do to better herself, and the girl taking complete control in the romance, bedroom, etc. departments. So much delicious vulnerability. Truly we ...

Thanks for another high quality chapter!
Take your time. It's been an awesome ride. I enjoyed every chapter of this.

Very nice. I noticed you emphasize the pronoun 'I' by putting asterisks around it, that works okay. I have not thought of a better way yet. I just wanted to share frustration that it's hard to emphasize that word. It's too narrow.
And yet, because we try not to put ourselves first all the time ...

Thank you for another great chapter! I am thinking the reason Annie is frustrated has something to do with the 3 girls from DSigma

Thank you for this chapter! I can tell the dialogues are well thought. Love it!