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Nicely written and most interesting story. I love your title - Vestiphobia, an incredibly original word to use in an erotic story and I applaud your selection of it to make it a basis of your work.

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For those unfamiliar ...

Excellent chapter. Looking forward to the next installment of the adventure discovery.

How exciting, the cause of the problem revealed at last!

And Debra got exactly what you'd expect from somebody who tried to dispel a curse without first knowing the precise nature of the curse. If you try to dispel a curse without working within its specific framework or original wording you'll ...

I've been reading this on the Naked Fiction storyboard and commenting there, but reserving my full comments until the whole thing is finished, but I'm liking it so far.

Got to be honest, after getting caught by the professor in the last chapter I didn’t expect things to get resolved so smoothly. I’m looking forward to the next update. I’m also quite curious as to how Lisa will end up breaking her curse? I’m assuming that she’s going to need to make peace with the ...

Hello, all!

My name is Fred. I’ve been hovering around this board for several months now, enjoying the stories. I haven’t shared my own work yet, though, and I have a story that I posted elsewhere long ago that I think is good enough to share. I don’t take that lightly in the company of writers ...

This was quite well-written! Nice job with the dialogue between Zoe and Yvain, which was quite believable. The situation is a nice twist on the dystopian, and the “it’s the break we’ve been waiting for” moment at the end is perfectly on form for this genre.

Looking forward to more!

"Let's try another example. Would you risk a wedgie?"

"A wedgie? You mean, like, my underwear?"

"Yep. A big fat wedgie. Would you risk getting one from me?"

"For twenty dollars? What would the odds be?"

"Two in ten again?"

She thought about it for a minute, while my heart pounded. Tara was ...

Hopefully, this will fix the format issue. Be patient - we're getting to the good parts. :)

The Tutor, part 3


I expected her to go straight to the easy bowl and stay there, but Tara had other ideas. “That depends. What's the prize and the odds?”

Smart. I love smart women.

“You’re learning ...

Thank you to all the kind folks who have replied with comments and who have liked the piece. I have started working on a more pure ENF story, but this one isn't finished yet, so...

The Tutor, continued:

A week passed after that unbelievable night, and it passed, to be honest, with a great deal ...