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Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 3. Lunch and Surprise, Part One


In Arizona it takes a while for winter to set in. The first couple months of the school year are still hot, and lots of people in the city of Tucson
have a swimming pool in their back yards to take advantage of the extra long summer ...

Another suggestion:

We know Jim likes to take a shower before bed each night.
One night, when mom is not there, Lola goes into the bathroom first and she gets into the bathtub. The door is left partially open,
and when Jim comes in, he doesn't know what to do at first as he stares at sister's ...

Still feels great to have you back writing TeenFan!

Is this the first time in one of your stories that we've had a girls POV?


I used a girl POV in the story: "Camping With Carter"

https://www.girlspns.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=2556

I got five chapters written on that one...several chapters are ...

Cool twist in the game, to have the dice.

Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 4. Lunch and Surprise, Part Two


I never did like the swimsuits mom made me wear. I didn't like the color, black, solid boring black. I didn't like how it constricted my movements.
I didn't like how it felt like a wet blanket on my body. The black color made me look ...

There is a limit to how long a post can be.
I don't know the specifics of it. I doubt you would be able to insert chapter 14 through 18 into an edit of chapter 13.

A number of writers lost sections of their stories, usually in the middle of long pieces of work.
When my account was brought back ...

Marie has to eventually believe that it's girls that don't need modesty. This is a slight spoiler, but it will be revealed later on the Marie thinks that boys need to protect their modesty. So when it comes to Hal, she'll want to make sure Summer respects his privacy while expecting Summer to ...

Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 5. Lunch and Surprise, Part Three


When Delilah and I slipped past the dining room, headed for the back door, my mom looked over and all she did was wave to us. Mom
got up from her chair, and she headed toward the games room, where my two brothers were still trying to ...

The only issue I have is girls who are 14 would not be in the same school as the 11 year olds.
If the setting was a Summer League and all girls of Elementary/Jr. High practiced at one location, used the lockers at the same time...that
would work.