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I love Scouting stories.

A little more heat on the Slow Burn please.
I don't want your readers to drop out before you get somebody nekkid again.
And girls are supposed to show up in the next round, right? Jeepman must get his daily girlie fix, ha ha...or he starts to tremble and sweat.

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Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 3. Lunch and Surprise, Part One


In Arizona it takes a while for winter to set in. The first couple months of the school year are still hot, and lots of people in the city of Tucson
have a swimming pool in their back yards to take advantage of the extra long summer ...

Another suggestion:

We know Jim likes to take a shower before bed each night.
One night, when mom is not there, Lola goes into the bathroom first and she gets into the bathtub. The door is left partially open,
and when Jim comes in, he doesn't know what to do at first as he stares at sister's ...

Still feels great to have you back writing TeenFan!

Is this the first time in one of your stories that we've had a girls POV?


I used a girl POV in the story: "Camping With Carter"

https://www.girlspns.com/viewtopic.php?f=5&t=2556

I got five chapters written on that one...several chapters are ...

Cool twist in the game, to have the dice.

Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 4. Lunch and Surprise, Part Two


I never did like the swimsuits mom made me wear. I didn't like the color, black, solid boring black. I didn't like how it constricted my movements.
I didn't like how it felt like a wet blanket on my body. The black color made me look ...

There is a limit to how long a post can be.
I don't know the specifics of it. I doubt you would be able to insert chapter 14 through 18 into an edit of chapter 13.

A number of writers lost sections of their stories, usually in the middle of long pieces of work.
When my account was brought back ...

Marie has to eventually believe that it's girls that don't need modesty. This is a slight spoiler, but it will be revealed later on the Marie thinks that boys need to protect their modesty. So when it comes to Hal, she'll want to make sure Summer respects his privacy while expecting Summer to ...