Pantsing and Stripping Forums

Personal preference is a girl stripping/humiliating another girl. No one understands how to push a woman's buttons and really get under their skin like another woman. Face it, no matter how a man studies a woman/girl he'll never really understand what she is thinking or feeling. Even when a man is s...

BRILLIANT! I am absolutely thrilled with the rivalry between Katelyn and Julia. The interaction between the two is superbly written. I hope this continues for many more chapters.

Hooked6

Very interesting start with loads of potential! Eagerly awaiting the next installment. If you wouldn't mind a few minor constructive suggestions, I would recommend skipping a line between each paragraph (or double line if you are using a word processor that this site's software posts paragraph's tog...

I can't believe I am just now getting around to reading this marvelous story! I love that her blackmailer turned out to be a female classmate. Your pacing is perfect and the descriptive visuals are most entertaining!

Well done! Looking forward to more soon.

Hooked6

As for describing her features. You’re correct that nearly all stories have that. I’m just not interested in it, I’d rather the reader decide her race/size/looks etc for themselves. Occasionally I lead everyone to my interpretation of what she looks like without thinking, but I’d rather the reader ...

This was another amazingly stimulating chapter! The humiliation in front of a classmate of hers and the potential for that student to take advantage of Candice is just to tantalizing for words. You outdid yourself here and my hat is off to your creativity. I am glad to see that you haven't given up ...

Nice twist on the usual "exposed in the doctor's office" stories. Kudos for your creativity.

Hooked6

What a great story! Though this is a logical end-point for a short story, I hope it doesn't end here as I like to see how our favorite model fares as her ordeal continues. I must say I have read several of your works and your writing style is wonderful. You have a way with using words to create vivi...

Hooked6, I realize that ENM is not your thing, but I am trying my hand at it. It is very female focused, even told from the perspective of a middle aged woman. I am curious of your opinion, if you have a few minutes: https://www.girlspns.com/viewtopic.php?t=4181 I would be happy and most honored to...

There are several things I like about this story. First, it makes me think about what might be going on with Annie. It is rather like those complex British murder/mysteries that give possibilities and clues which may or may not be germane to the actual plot or solution but they give rise to speculat...