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by dsweenz71
Fri Nov 17, 2023 2:12 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 17)


Male on male sexual activity isn't my thing generally but I thought this was really well done because it was more about the humiliation of it than any kind of lust or sexual desire.

I don't anticipate doing too much male on male, so don't worry. It just felt inevitable in this chapter since ...
by dsweenz71
Fri Nov 17, 2023 2:40 pm
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I can't say I really care if it ends very darkly - that'd certainly be more believable than 'and he just moved on, forget all about it and lived happily ever after'

It won't be a happily ever after, but may be up to the reader to determine in their own mind. The great thing about this story ...
by dsweenz71
Fri Nov 17, 2023 3:50 pm
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Wow, the post chapter commentary is longer than the chapter.

Partially my fault. I tend to reply as often as I can and this clogs up the comment section. I don't mind in the slightest - that's why I make sure to have a table of contents, and hot links to the next chapter, so the readers of the ...
by dsweenz71
Sat Nov 18, 2023 1:08 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 17)


grrr... finally got stable diffusion to make something half decent (for what I had in mind)... and I get an http error trying to attach it??


Responding to formally thank you for inspiring me to go through and make some art :) I still might use yours but I want to make sure it makes sense where ...
by dsweenz71
Sun Nov 19, 2023 12:51 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 19)


Seth's High School Humiliation

Part 20: The Library

It was Wednesday morning, and Justin was looking over the email that Mrs. Masters had sent him. She had given her assistant several tasks already, and a small part of him regretted not negotiating a higher rate than $200/week. Still, he was ...
by dsweenz71
Sun Nov 19, 2023 1:38 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 19)


Maybe the Club will make sure that he starts to sleep naked, and now they can have proof of it :lol:

I may have already written somewhere what he 'usually' wears, but we'll have to wait and see what Monday will have in store for our protagonist.

Back to dissecting mode...

Thanks for catching ...
by dsweenz71
Sun Nov 19, 2023 2:09 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 19)


A+ for trying tho, right?
Of course :lol:
...would have seeped through the material so would have made more sense, to me, to keep him the shorts
Hmmm. I see how you could think of it that way. In my head it was a thin layer of glue, just affecting the surface layer of the pants, not enough to ...
by dsweenz71
Sun Nov 19, 2023 2:28 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 19)


Bikini's better be acceptable attire for the event, as well as speedos and European thong suits.
You know, 'swimsuit' is a very broad term and can refer to so many different styles. You also mentioned girls showing some skin... the likelihood is high, and even that does not necessarily bode well ...
by dsweenz71
Mon Nov 20, 2023 9:31 am
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 20)


Seth's High School Humiliation

Part 21: The Fever

Seth didn’t last much longer at school on that Wednesday. The seat of his pants kept sticking to walls and lockers as he leaned up against them, and at one point he full-on mooned a girl in his shop class when he went to get out of his chair ...
by dsweenz71
Tue Nov 21, 2023 3:21 pm
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Re: Seth's High School Humiliation (New Nov. 20)


ma'am normally (contraction of madam) - mam is an informal term for mother.
Oops. I've seen it both ways. Might be a regional thing, but I'll correct it!

And an important basketball game after taking the pills... It will certainly be ANOTHER interesting day
It sure will be!

Does Seth suspect ...