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by johndoe06
Fri Oct 20, 2023 7:24 pm
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Erica and The Big Game - (Final) Part 6

Erica and The Big Game - (Final) Part 6

Ok, so the girl's locker room is not far from here, I just need to get there and go through the fire exit.

Doing my best to run while covering my privates, I managed to get to the locker room without being caught by anyone. Locker room was empty as well ...
by johndoe06
Sat Oct 21, 2023 9:42 pm
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Erica and The Day After The Big Game - Part 1

So people seem to be enjoying the new stories (shout out to perseus) so I'll keep them coming.

This next one takes place directly after the events of the last story "Erica and The Big Game" like the title suggests.

I hope you all enjoy ...
by KiTA
Tue Oct 24, 2023 11:13 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)

A fun chapter 2.

I think the poor girl needs therapy, myself.

Therapy is...
Useful for a DA: Therapist are duty bound to keep secrets, and would end their career by losing their license if they let one get out
Useful for a young exhibitionist: She can learn what the word means and get a grip on ...
by imanewb
Tue Oct 24, 2023 6:26 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)


A fun chapter 2.

I think the poor girl needs therapy, myself.

Therapy is...


I'll add my thanks... I may be borrowing your suggestion for my own story as my character just kinda curled up and died inside (and that wasn't my intent) :)


I'm putting the finishing touches on part 3 and I should ...
by student
Tue Oct 24, 2023 9:45 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 2 - 10/18)

Therapy is an opportunity to have Lia embrace nudism. She's already a secret exhibitionist (got drunk and danced topless at the frat party) but she was hesitant and needed to have her inhibitions removed. Now Lia is SUPPOSEDED to exhibit her nude body at home--and possibly other places. A therapist ...
by student
Wed Oct 25, 2023 4:38 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)

So far, enjoyable.

Chapter One--Lia falls down the rabbit hole head. first.

Chapter Two, while inside the rabbit hole she encounters a bigger, deeper hole.

Chapter Three, there's a third rabbit hole in the second rabbit hole and this one is a briar patch!

Deeper and deeper. Waiting for the next ...
by student
Wed Oct 25, 2023 9:08 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)

Silly questions:

Is Lia on The Pill?

Is Lia's lack of impulse control worrisome enough to seek evaluation by a mental health care professional?

Did Lia have any friends other than the gruesome twosome who were exploiting Lia? Only three chapters but no mention of concerned friends visiting Lia ...
by johndoe06
Wed Oct 25, 2023 9:16 pm
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Erica gets asked to the Dance - Part 1

This next story takes place after the events of "Erica and The Big Game" and "Erica and The Day After The Big Game".

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Erica gets asked to the Dance - Part 1

For a couple of weeks I tried laying low (as I usually did anyway) while ...
by neverdoubted
Wed Oct 25, 2023 9:36 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)

Congratulations on a well written story with good pacing and relatable characters! I like how you are willing to let good scenes play out and not rushing them. Beyond my standard author advice to "use dialog sparingly", my only specific feedback would be very minor. Try to avoid overusing phrases ...
by student
Thu Oct 26, 2023 2:48 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 3 - 10/24)

THE APPLE DOESN'T FALL FAR FROM THE TREE. :shock: :evil:

What was Mother Diana like when she was young--and stupid? Perhaps it was Daddy Steve. Or one of them could have had a troublesome sibling who had trouble controlling their impulse experienced a wild rollercoaster youth. Backstories are ...