I wouldn't worry about criticism over minute details. You have done marvelous job and I hope you continue with the story. It certainly doesn't seem like you have lost your path to me.
If you are worried about a particular detail in a chapter you can always use the edit function (the pencil icon at ...
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- Thu Feb 01, 2024 10:24 am
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- Thu Feb 01, 2024 2:42 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 9 - 1/30)
The clothes were brought to Diana after the unwrapping, I guess I didn't mention what happened to them because the important part to Lia was that she wasn't getting them back. You can assume Diana still has them, but I suppose I should have said so.
Lia actually likes Gil, he was kind to her ...
- Thu Feb 01, 2024 2:51 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 9 - 1/30)
Definitely have not lost your way. I think this is a great story so far. And hope it continues for many more parts
- Thu Feb 01, 2024 3:38 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 9 - 1/30)
I may not be conveying these ideas as effectively as I think when I'm writing it, the story is already 4 parts longer than I originally planned so maybe I'm losing the path a bit.
I couldn't be happier with the way this story is going. I just use my imagination for any details not mentioned. It ...
- Thu Feb 01, 2024 5:02 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 9 - 1/30)
rrh62 wrote: Thu Feb 01, 2024 3:38 pm I certainly hope this is not an indication that you're planning to kill the story soon.I strongly believe it has a potential for a 40+ chapter saga.
I totally agree!!
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- Thu Feb 01, 2024 8:12 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 9 - 1/30)
There are enough plots to form multiple spin-off stories. Or these plot lines can be addressed under the same title.
Lia was busted for sneaking out at night and getting drunk in a frat party and dancing topless on a table. Trevor made a joke about taking Lia's clothing away so that if she snuck ...
Lia was busted for sneaking out at night and getting drunk in a frat party and dancing topless on a table. Trevor made a joke about taking Lia's clothing away so that if she snuck ...
- Thu Feb 01, 2024 11:12 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 9 - 1/30)
I sound like I'm almost reading your mind because you have set up a rational world. I still get surprised by Lia's New Reality. Stephen and Diane love their daughter but the teenage years are when parents go insane.
- Fri Feb 02, 2024 4:57 pm
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Closely following this series and loving it. I hope that one of the story's central focuses remains the upping Lia's humiliation, gradually but surely, by her parents and family. That is what attracted me to this story in the first place, especially how Lia had to ask permission from her parents to ...
- Fri Feb 02, 2024 10:49 pm
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Dare Me - Chapter 17 - Little Sister, Big Sister (Part 1)
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Author's Note: the following chapter contains explicit sexual depictions. If that's not what you're here for, I would advise you to move along. You have been warned!
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Dare Me - Chapter 17 - Little ...
Author's Note: the following chapter contains explicit sexual depictions. If that's not what you're here for, I would advise you to move along. You have been warned!
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Dare Me - Chapter 17 - Little ...
- Mon Feb 05, 2024 3:48 pm
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The Family Tradition: Picture Day - Chapter 2c
“Oh, Julie, are you ok?!” mom asked me with worry.
“I-I think so…” I said, still kind of in a daze. I was sprawled out on the floor, with my legs spread towards everyone. Only then did I realize what I must be showing them, my panty wedged pussy and butt, and I started to close my legs in ...
“I-I think so…” I said, still kind of in a daze. I was sprawled out on the floor, with my legs spread towards everyone. Only then did I realize what I must be showing them, my panty wedged pussy and butt, and I started to close my legs in ...