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PART 8: CAMERON TO THE RESCUE

Ellie hoped Cameron was still nearby enough to hear her shout for help. She should’ve known the stripping war would keep escalating, and that she wasn’t immune as a target. Naturally more modest than her friend Mia, Ellie had been masking the shyness she felt about ...

PART 9: CONSEQUENCES

Ellie quickly pulled her bikini top back on, staring at the back of Cameron’s head as she did so. Both teens were red-faced, Cameron’s with guilt at what he had just done, Ellie’s with both embarrassment and anger.

In truth, Ellie had dreamt of one day showing her breasts to ...

I’d like to point out an absolute BRILLIANT writing tool you’ve implemented with the wrist bands that indicate allowed time.
It signifies that there is a definitive end, so all you need to do is fill time.
It’s something I wish I’d remember to utilize more often.


Glad you clocked the built-in ...

Comeuppance

Part I. Back-story


Okay, my name is Dennis Goodwin, but everyone calls me Denny. I live with my Mom and my twin brother. My Dad moved out about a year ago. We’re in the ninth grade at St. Matthew’s High School. We used to go to Maplewood High, but there was some trouble, and we ...

III. Led by the Penis

“Come on!” Let’s get them over to the baseball field!” Let’s have some fun with them!”

Carrie reached down and grabbed my penis between her thumb and her fingers. “Come on, Little Boy!” she chuckled. “Time to punish you!”

I stood still, refusing to move my feet.

“I said ...

Carter was set for the year. All his meets planned out. Track star extraordinaire would look amazing above his door. It was his first year of highschool and his first time on a team. A team full of girls. Gym clothes had changed a lot over the years. No longer was it tight shorts and thin shirts. It ...

EPILOGUE: BEDTIME CHAT

Alone in his bedroom that night, Cameron lay naked in the dark on top of his bedcovers. He was drained and covered in sweat, having taken care of the need that had been clawing at him ever since he’d got home from the pool.

He thought of the relationship that seemed to be ...

Watcth the movie The Monkey, it has a great scene of panstsing is not shown, but the attitude of the girls doing it is perfect is exactly the kind of female characters I write, cruel and to the point.

*** This is a story that I have been thinking about for a while, but not really sure if it is something others would be interested in. It's a slow burn, and as of writing this, i have reached chapter 5, where the first game ends.

Also not quite completely happy with how well I've written it as ...

Great start. Looks very promising.