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Foreword: Inspired by Caroline is Confused by never doubted a story that has really stuck with me with his unique protagonist and her unique take on the world. I'm sad that story never got more attention as I thought it was a great concept for ENF and look forward to future chapters.

Also I know ...

--PART 4--

Sarah's frenemies had made sure that she would have her back to the staircase at the rear of the living room, but Jenny had an ideal view of it between the two armchairs. As expected, she saw the boys (or at least the twins) she knew so well , quietly creeping down the stairs, stopping ...

I actually really enjoyed Caroline is Confused. It's a pity there's not more of it, and though I've yet to read this iteration of it, I'll certainly be keeping an eye on this story.

Perhaps after a few established chapters gave been posted I'll binge read it.

Wow! I'm honored by this homage. And I like what you've done with it. You've managed to distill the concept down into a much more digestible short story in a way I never seem able to do. I envy authors who are able to get to the point without seven chapters of backstory. I also loved the "age 10-12 ...

Mars357, thank you for your enthusiastic comment (and also to all those who took the time to comment and offer their insights.) I am working on the next two chapters as you read this and I am hoping to post them very shortly and several more chapters are in the works. I originally envisioned a 10 ...

"Sure, they're in the kitchen!" Mark said with a chirp.

"Thanks, Mark!" Kelly jumped out of the bathtub still sopping wet, the water dripping off her and onto the bathroom floor as her feet slapped it.

"She won't be long," Tim and Jim laughed.

Kelly flew from the bathroom into the kitchen and saw ...

--PART 5--

Once the girls' squeals and laughter had subsided, Jenny pronounced, "Right you two, upstairs now."

"Aw, can't we stay down here?" Harry complained as he and his brother tore their eyes away from Sarah's chest.

"No, you've had your fun, now go."

"We've got a game to finish," sneered ...

Synopsis

13-year-old Hana Hunter and 15-year-old Melody Parker are excited to visit the mall in a neighboring town with their families, wanting to buy new school clothes for themselves. But a strange new law neither girl has ever heard of will lead to embarrassment and humiliation for both girls ...

Chapter 2
Mitch wore a large grin as he continued to ogle the naked bodies of his little sister, Hana, along with the girl he had a crush on, his sophomore classmate, Melody. This was the first time in his life that he had ever seen a girl the same age as him, 15 years old, naked, and he could ...

Superevil really dropped the motherload of incredible enf on us!