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superevil7 wrote "Personally I always thought of the infractions being rescinded after a day or two. Usually all at once, not going down one level at a time. "

That's a good thing because at Level 4 the female's wrists are secured behind their backs and that means the females cannot use their hands ...

This is a different take on "The Last Straw" by neverdoubted. It will be interesting to see how you develop it.

I don't know the rest of the story--so going compliant in one day may not have been a long journey. Here's a clue:
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Chapter 1
"Mom, can't I just go take one itsy bitsy, teeny weeny, quick little peek at Mitch in the shower??" Young, 13-year-old, Hana Hunter, whined, having just ...

"Enjoying the View" was fun to read!

Sam seems more embarrassed that his sisters are about the girls' nudity than the girls themselves are.

Debbifan, some of the visitors would be subject to mandatory nudity due to age--without committing infractions. Perhaps you could write something similar with superevil7's permission. Don't use the same characters--just have some out-of-town visitors show up to visit a family living in Grandview ...

Another fine tale of a naked damsel trapped in an alternate reality. Thanks for a great story.

I am impressed with how that ruthless revenge was suggested by Mary Beth's own mother. Someone was embarrassed by how her daughter aped Mommy's behavior. Will this make the adults re-evaluate their own behavior shown in the earlier edition of this story?

I do hope that this series continues because I want to see the outcome. Where is it going

I like the story--both original and this revised edition. The language reminds me of Victorian romance novels and may be too cerebral for some, but I like it anyway. Sounds like a 13-year-old narrator is retreating to more abstract language in order to distance himself from a situation that he has ...