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Oopsydaisy wrote: Sat May 11, 2024 7:56 pm The desk was now fully clothed and I was completely naked.

Nice touch!

My first chance to read a story in awhile. I'm liking it, and am interested to see where it goes.

Your post motivated me to reread this story, which I did over the last few days. After doing so, I have to say that it needs a lot of work. You need to work on many more chapters, because the story and the quality of writing is too good to allow it to sit dormant any longer, and once picked up, it ...

The following is applicable to all chapters of “Underpants Memoirs:”

© September 2019 by Blondie

This is a work of fiction and is fantasy only. Names, characters, places, and incidents are products of the author's imagination and are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events or locales ...

How do you see Hayden feeling about Chantelle's situation at the moment? Do you think he feels any portion of responsibility or guilt for a photo of her now being in Josh's hands? I know he's got major problems of his own right now, but has anyone else thought about this? Conversely, do you think ...

I guess you lost me here. All previous chapters I felt what Riley feels, this one not. In my opinion it is way out of line with previous chapter which were to humiliate Riley, this on isn’t about humiliation anymore. Too bad……
I was afraid this would happen one time. Probably my last feedback on ...

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Chapter 2: First Tighty-Whities Sighting

It didn't take long for me to realize that I was attending a school like no other.

It was during our second week of classes in my freshman year. I was walking across the courtyard during recess, on my ...

As TeenFan noted, your grammar and structure are sound, so the potential is there to put together some good ENF stories.

Everyone has their own style, and you should stick with what works for you—and to take it a step further, what excites you. Chances are good that if you're enjoying what you're ...

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Chapter 3: The Traditional Walk of Shame, Part 1

It was a warm, pleasant afternoon in early autumn, about two weeks removed from the wonderful scene in the courtyard that I previously described. I was sitting under the sun in the stands ...

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Chapter 4: The Traditional Walk of Shame, Part 2

"Oh no! Oh shit! Oh!" cried out the panicked Harvey when he realized he was expeditiously and simultaneously divested of his corduroys and his shirt and was out in public wearing only his ...

mikewozere wrote: Thu Aug 01, 2024 6:55 am Bump. Will there be any more chapters? Was really enjoying this story

The challenge is finding the time to do it justice. But yes, there will be more. Felicity is not done with her humiliation and ownership of Miss Joplin.

Thanks for checking in.