I think all authors and readers have different tastes, different styles of writing and different personality’s which all come out in the diversity on this board.
So although it is good asking for opinions on posts you’ll never get a general consensus of what’s good and what’s bad. Every story I’ve ...
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- Fri Feb 26, 2021 4:58 pm
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The Prefect, Cont.
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In one deft motion, Kaitlyn pulled Elise’s hands behind her, grabbed the handcuffs from Caroline’s hands, and bound them together. Elise didn’t even realize what was happening until it was too late. “Wait! Wait, wait, wait!” she gasped. She thought Kaitlyn was just being obnoxiously rough ...
In one deft motion, Kaitlyn pulled Elise’s hands behind her, grabbed the handcuffs from Caroline’s hands, and bound them together. Elise didn’t even realize what was happening until it was too late. “Wait! Wait, wait, wait!” she gasped. She thought Kaitlyn was just being obnoxiously rough ...
- Fri Feb 26, 2021 5:25 pm
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The Debt: Part One
PART ONE
Jade couldn’t believe her eyes.
Of all people, Elizabeth was walking into detention. Well, Liz, but Jade never called non-friends by nicknames. And Elizabeth was just one of those girls in her grade that irritated her. Not for any specific reason. Jade just disliked most people who didn ...
Jade couldn’t believe her eyes.
Of all people, Elizabeth was walking into detention. Well, Liz, but Jade never called non-friends by nicknames. And Elizabeth was just one of those girls in her grade that irritated her. Not for any specific reason. Jade just disliked most people who didn ...
- Sun Feb 28, 2021 10:53 pm
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The Debt: Part Two
PART TWO
Liz had a plan of her own: keep her head down.
The moment the bell rang to signify the official start of what would normally be her free period, she just kept quiet and pulled out an AP assignment to work on. Technically, detention was the same thing as a study hour with the right ...
Liz had a plan of her own: keep her head down.
The moment the bell rang to signify the official start of what would normally be her free period, she just kept quiet and pulled out an AP assignment to work on. Technically, detention was the same thing as a study hour with the right ...
- Mon Mar 01, 2021 6:09 pm
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The Debt: Part Three
PART THREE
Jade rested her wrist on the back of Liz’s chair and, without any hesitation, began pouring.
Ideally, glue would work best on someone’s pants if it was applied to the seat before they sat down, but Jade didn’t have that opportunity. Instead, she gently squeezed on the tube, letting it ...
Jade rested her wrist on the back of Liz’s chair and, without any hesitation, began pouring.
Ideally, glue would work best on someone’s pants if it was applied to the seat before they sat down, but Jade didn’t have that opportunity. Instead, she gently squeezed on the tube, letting it ...
- Wed Mar 03, 2021 5:31 pm
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The Debt: Part Four
PART FOUR
What was Jade doing??
Liz kept clutching her tank top and bra to her chest, frantically glancing left and right to see if anyone was seeing this. Would they say something in her defense, or watch with excited interest?
A room that already laughed at her getting in trouble? Probably ...
What was Jade doing??
Liz kept clutching her tank top and bra to her chest, frantically glancing left and right to see if anyone was seeing this. Would they say something in her defense, or watch with excited interest?
A room that already laughed at her getting in trouble? Probably ...
- Fri Mar 05, 2021 8:22 am
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Re: The photo shoot part 1
My name is Amy, my sister was called Nikki, and my best friend was Chloe.
“Hey Amy, and Nikki, we should try out some new clothes, we can go to this boutique over here.” Said Chloe.
Me and Nikki followed into the store. Both then picked out clothes purposefully knowing they were too big for me ...
“Hey Amy, and Nikki, we should try out some new clothes, we can go to this boutique over here.” Said Chloe.
Me and Nikki followed into the store. Both then picked out clothes purposefully knowing they were too big for me ...
- Fri Mar 05, 2021 7:37 pm
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The Debt: Part Five
PART FIVE
The bad news was, it was free period. Students weren’t bound to classes, and could be literally anywhere. The good news was, it was frowned upon for students to actually roam the halls. The unspoken rule was that once you found a spot, you should commit to it. Whether it was to just ...
The bad news was, it was free period. Students weren’t bound to classes, and could be literally anywhere. The good news was, it was frowned upon for students to actually roam the halls. The unspoken rule was that once you found a spot, you should commit to it. Whether it was to just ...
- Mon Mar 08, 2021 8:40 pm
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The Debt: Part Six
PART SIX
Liz genuinely didn’t know how to react.
It’s not like Sarah and her were enemies. In fact, they were part of the same friend group. It’s just that Sarah was a bit hot-headed compared to the rest of them. Quick to anger and easy to annoy. Liz and Sarah had known each other since ...
Liz genuinely didn’t know how to react.
It’s not like Sarah and her were enemies. In fact, they were part of the same friend group. It’s just that Sarah was a bit hot-headed compared to the rest of them. Quick to anger and easy to annoy. Liz and Sarah had known each other since ...
- Wed Mar 10, 2021 7:40 pm
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The Debt: Part Seven
PART SEVEN
Liz took a few more hesitant steps into the locker room, feeling a light breeze on her bare back as the door closed behind her and sent a bit of air in her direction. Why couldn’t she have run into Leah, or Ruth, or literally any other friend besides Sarah?
Just wanting to get it over ...
Liz took a few more hesitant steps into the locker room, feeling a light breeze on her bare back as the door closed behind her and sent a bit of air in her direction. Why couldn’t she have run into Leah, or Ruth, or literally any other friend besides Sarah?
Just wanting to get it over ...