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I was going to play it straight with this story and stick with the Mum as she was in the earlier part of the story, but I feel like she's having so much fun that angels are ringing and bells are singing - she''s so happy/excited, that she's got them backward!

Things shifted quickly. I love pushing ...

A short story - 8-9 chapters.

“Wake up, sleepy head!!” my mom poked me in my bed. “I know you are pretending to sleep, and the tickle monster will come out if you don’t get up!”

I continued to lay there like a lump. I knew it wouldn’t work; my mom wasn’t going anywhere. She lived for today!!

Today is the day that I dread all ...

The next birthday activity was in the living room. It’s very familiar to me, as it’s been a standard since I was a little girl. I was obsessed with hula hoops and mastered spinning them around my waist and simultaneously spinning them with my leg, and arms. It’s all about getting into a rhythm and ...

nice, no troll on this one!


My mother was adamant about not being in her birthday suit twice a year. That’s when I decided to double down.

“I will if you will,” I dared her.

“I already said I’d probably go put my plug in while you work on yours,” Mom replied.

“No, I will strip to my ...

>Please don't any brat upsetting you.

When he did it before, it was a litany of personal attacks. I am disabled, so things like "Go outside and touch grass" that he was writing hit me at a time when I wish I could do just that. I had to have three of my stories completely deleted. He doesn't like ...

Thanks, I do my best to edit myself, but I read this so many times it's hard to catch. If you see anything egregious, please private me with the details and I''ll fix? I could post faster if I didn't have to edit so much. The pic links aren't supposed to work yet.

Chapter Four:

“I think I am ...

how do things work in this universe?

The parents basically adopt a boys/girls don't need modesty stance, and then they might take them to the community pool and say "Okay, right..off with your suit before you get in the car"?

I feel like in the 1970s, that was unisex, the way many of them did look ...

The reason that I ask is I often play with themes where the family dynamic is such that gender plays a role in how you are expected to behave. It's usually chalked up to "this is how I was raised" and/or "I was raised to think girls did all the house work, so in this house...the boys will do it ...

Hi,

This is neat. A few suggestions;

* I had to google "Cenotes". I was picturing a C-note, (100 dollar bill). You may want to describe it more, and use other words for exposition of the location.


* I am the worst at grammar/editing before I post, and I am sure you probably plan to run a spell ...