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With this being my first real attempt at lengthy writing, any (constructive) feedback is appreciated.

Chapter III

“What is it that you expect? What do you need me to do?” Rachel quizzed her brother after they had retreated to the back garden. Their mother’s bedroom overlooked the front, so they ...

In those days, family vacations were a lot different than they are today. It wasn't uncommon in the early seventies for families to load up the old station wagon and hit the road to experience all the wonders the greatest, Goddamned country on Earth had to offer. The trip itself often left bored ...

Great going. Personally, I'd rather mom doesn't join in because that will diffuse a lot of tension in the house. And I tend to like the tension, Rachel still has something to hide even in her own house. But then, that's just me. Looking forward to more.

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Chapter 6: An Unwelcome Makeover

It was mid-morning on a lazy, overcast day during the fall break. I had nothing going on and was up for a little fun, so I thought I would check in on my new favorite teacher.

Good morning, Miss Joplin.

It ...

Chapter IV

It was heading into spring now and at breakfast on Saturday, Jane let them all know that she had some money saved for new summer-weight jackets. She’d also managed to get some valuable overtime, so would they all like to go shopping? She trusted Alex enough to make sure that Gemma ...

Chapter V

Both girls were on a high when they got through the door. Neither wanted the fun to end, so Alex agreed to chaperone/direct them some more after they all had a bite to eat. He put Jake off till later that afternoon. Lunch was a swiftly eaten sandwich and the atmosphere cackled with ...

Chapter VI

Gemma was not given her skirt back till they reached the turning into their street. It turned out to be a wise decision as no sooner had the trio got in the door than they saw their mother’s car pull in. The two girls went as if to go up and change, but Alex instructed them to wait.

“My ...

Also since she is now going to be going NAKED everywhere, is she going to donate all her clothes, toss them in the trash, toss them on a bonfire and burn them, or sell them at a garage sale, since she doesn't need to own any more clothes at all.

“Well, Gem, it looks like you are involved after this weekend!” Gemma grinned. The three were back at the house with an hour or two before their mom got back.

Alex continued, “Rachel will be wearing a bra again for school tomorrow – you won’t.”

“Secondly, no tricks like Rachel is using to pretend ...

Chapter VIII

Tuesday morning saw the first two-girl pussy inspection. Gemma copied Rachel’s lead and dropped her skirt on the floor. Disregarding shoes, both were naked from the waist down. Alex was having major conflicting thoughts inside his head. On one hand, these were two extremely attractive ...