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by Blondie2718
Mon Apr 01, 2024 7:24 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued

This story keeps getting better and better. I would say though that the dares Claire is pushing on Emma are so risky that it's only a matter of time before it implodes causing Emma to get discovered and the fun to stop for Claire. So, I am curious to see how this progresses.
by Datom
Sat Apr 06, 2024 8:21 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued

Woah! Creepy!

Good idea, including the ice-water, and that naked walk through the house.

Looking forward to seeing what The Voice makes her do next!
by scott_forgot
Mon Apr 08, 2024 10:34 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued

This is only the third story I have commented on. That's because I like it. That said, I will comment on some things just to have a conversation.

First, the story is much more enjoyable when the the blackmailer is known. I feared it would be some creepy person or even a family member. Claire made ...
by Hooked6
Mon Apr 15, 2024 9:27 am
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued



As for describing her features. You’re correct that nearly all stories have that. I’m just not interested in it, I’d rather the reader decide her race/size/looks etc for themselves. Occasionally I lead everyone to my interpretation of what she looks like without thinking, but I’d rather the ...
by Revengedpirate
Sun Apr 21, 2024 12:18 am
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued

Hope there will be a continuation loved this
by LauraLaura
Sun Apr 21, 2024 12:06 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 3/29/24 - School Bus Strip Continued

Revengedpirate wrote: Sun Apr 21, 2024 12:18 am Hope there will be a continuation loved this
I definitely second this.
This is currently the story I refresh this site for every day!
by Deviant_9
Sat Aug 31, 2024 12:43 am
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Highschool Humiliation

Long time reader, but first time posting. Haven’t really done much writing before so any feedback welcome. All characters are 18+. This will likely be a multipart story and will be updated as I have time to write.

Part 1

It all started with Mary.
The second semester of year 11 had just started ...
by mcenf
Mon Nov 04, 2024 11:05 pm
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Amy Unfiltered

Hey everyone!

I want to share with you several chapters of a story I’ve been working on. The idea is for it to be a bit long, so it’ll be a challenge for me to keep everything in context and pay attention to the details. I hope you enjoy it, and I’ll try not to forget to translate anything before ...
by mcenf
Wed Nov 06, 2024 1:18 pm
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Amy Unfiltered - Chapter 7

Amy kept her gaze fixed on the floor, focusing on her own bare feet and each tile she crossed. She tried to concentrate on the rhythm of her steps, trying to silence the whirlwind of thoughts and panic that accumulated in her mind. However, when she briefly raised her gaze, she noticed something ...
by Bucket
Fri Nov 08, 2024 11:47 pm
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Re: The Blinds - Update 9/19/24 - Caught Naked

jojo12026 wrote: Thu Oct 24, 2024 4:14 amBump
Seconded.