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by flashharry
Mon Mar 25, 2024 3:24 pm
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Re: The Lairds (Chapter VIII)

Chapter VIII

Tuesday morning saw the first two-girl pussy inspection. Gemma copied Rachel’s lead and dropped her skirt on the floor. Disregarding shoes, both were naked from the waist down. Alex was having major conflicting thoughts inside his head. On one hand, these were two extremely attractive ...
by flashharry
Tue Mar 26, 2024 9:32 pm
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Re: Dare Me (new 3/26)

This is the standard of writing that some of us aspire to.
I did think Hannah would be the answer to Lucy's task a while back, but the twists and turns are superb. In many ways, I don't want Lucy to find the answer for a while yet.
by flashharry
Wed Mar 27, 2024 9:56 pm
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Re: The Lairds (Chapter IX - 27 March)

It has almost reached the point where what I have written has been posted. I'm grateful for the thanks and comments. Do I carry on with this, or try a different story? As a newbie on here, I am awed by some of the writings here and very much appreciate feedback.

Chapter IX


“Any regrets?” Alex ...
by flashharry
Fri Mar 29, 2024 5:27 pm
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Re: The Last Straw (new 3/28)

If I may answer that too - as a relative noob, I was captivated by the tasks faced by Lucy. I still am. She is by far and away my favourite character. You have developed her over the years (her years) and she is so believable. It is this believability that stands out and something I try and emulate ...
by flashharry
Tue Apr 02, 2024 11:14 am
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Re: The Lairds (Chapter X- 2nd April)

Chapter X

Monday morning soon came and almost before their mother’s car was down the drive, two skirts were dropped to the floor, and Alex got a lovely view of their bald pussies. After what seemed like several minutes, Gemma moved towards Alex, unzipping him quickly and grasping his member tightly ...
by flashharry
Wed Apr 03, 2024 5:30 pm
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Re: Tabatha's Torment

I, for one, would love to see this story develop. Great idea so far.
by flashharry
Wed May 01, 2024 12:35 pm
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Heather on a Slippery Slope - Ch3 23rd June

Pregnant at 16 by a man old enough to be her father, everyone told Heather it wouldn’t last. They were right, too. Five years later, she’d been dropped as her sugar daddy had predictably moved on to a younger model. She didn’t harbour hatred for him – she knew what she was getting into, and he had ...
by flashharry
Mon Jun 17, 2024 2:55 pm
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Re: Heather on a Slippery Slope - Ch2 17th June

Once home, Heather decided to get the inevitable out of the way and headed to the bathroom intent on a soak and a shave. Maybe the warm water would help her relax and improve her frame of mind, which was currently tearing itself to pieces in self-loathing and remorse.

Sinking into the bubbles after ...
by flashharry
Sun Jun 23, 2024 10:53 am
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Re: Heather on a Slippery Slope - Ch3 23rd June

Heather Ch3

Having not started work till around 10am, the day just flew by. Emma started to paint outside the porch – one bonus was that she didn’t have to worry about getting paint on her clothes!

David and Heather set to in the office. Heather began to learn a little about the writing that her ...
by flashharry
Sun Sep 08, 2024 8:54 pm
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Taboos

I have been reworking an old story. No incest, but full nudity, blackmail, and a lot of exposed females (post pubescent). Are we good on here?