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by steam train
Tue Apr 08, 2025 11:33 am
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Re: Exposed Update 8th March

Exposed 4
by Steam Train

copyright 2007 (2025) by Steam Train, all rights reserved
steam_t2007@yahoo.com

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This work is intended for ADULTS ONLY. It contains depictions of sexual activity involving minors. If you are not of a legal age in your locality to view such material or if such ...
by TeenFan
Tue Apr 08, 2025 1:58 pm
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Re: Strip Penalty shootout

My comments are not about disliking the story, just how the structure of writing could be better.

There are no paragraph breaks to separate different actions.
Multiple quotes from different characters are on the same line of script.
It all makes your story more difficult to read than it could be.
by TeenFan
Tue Apr 08, 2025 3:33 pm
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Re: Exposed

Very nice method of manipulation by the girls over the young males.
It had a realistic ending, with the two boys not being able to talk about what happened to them.
It seemed to me that Trent might have liked having his buddy give him a helping hand now n then.
by TeenFan
Tue Apr 08, 2025 4:04 pm
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Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (complete)

I'm bumping this story because it concluded six weeks ago.

I know I'm not the only one hoping for something new. Please...Please...Pretty Please.
by TeenFan
Tue Apr 08, 2025 5:23 pm
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Re: Worse Than Shameful: No Need For Modesty_New April 7

Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 22. Perfecting the Pose

Now I am not the best drawer in my art class, not even close. But if I take my time and focus I can get things to look fairly realistic. I worked
on drawing Bradley, and I thought it was going fairly well. I only had to erase some lines to start ...
by TeenFan
Wed Apr 09, 2025 4:55 pm
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Re: Worse Than Shameful: No Need For Modesty_New April 8

Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 23. A Change in Who's in Charge


It actually took me a while to get my head to stop spinning. I had just witnessed my older brother getting a handjob from Delilah, up real
close I got to watch it. I was amazed at how Bradley's penis changed color. It went from being ...
by SeeEffenem
Thu Apr 10, 2025 2:29 am
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Re: Reporting Live From Pinebrook Middle School!

Chapter 2: Getting The Press Pass

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Principal Martin sat back in his seat, frowning. Suzie Godwin had come into his office with a very serious claim. He didn’t blame Mr ...
by TeenFan
Thu Apr 10, 2025 8:24 pm
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Re: Worse Than Shameful: No Need For Modesty_New April 9

Worse Than Shameful
Chapter 24. Monkey Makes it Rain


I was nowhere near done applying the coats of color paint onto the portrait of my younger brother when Chad said he had to hop down from
the tree. He had been up there for longer than half an hour, and his stretched out legs must have been ...
by Jeepman89
Sat Apr 12, 2025 1:50 pm
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Re: Strip Poker Boys: Dares: Chapter 1 (12/4/25)

Love the dares! What's next I wonder.