I agree with Bucket. The story is marvelous so far and I would encourage you, Emily, to continue. In fact several of the last chapters were just plain wonderful!
I have always encouraged authors to write what pleases them and create as you feel appropriate. You can't write for or listen to a crowd ...
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- Fri Nov 15, 2024 3:54 am
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 20 Posted (11/14/2024)
School bells are ringing loud and clear; vacation is over, school is here – Winifred C Marshall
More Therapy – Chapter 20
The doors to the school were locked when we arrived. It was early still, so nobody had yet shown up. I wanted to feel nervous, but unfortunately, Sophie was in charge of ...
- Sun Nov 17, 2024 6:08 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/08)
Thanks everybody for the kind words! I’ll be continuing this story!
I want to make it very clear that all of this is purely fiction. Obviously, what the girls are doing to Riley is awful and wrong beyond measure. This story mostly comes from fantasies of mine and my own imagination of being in ...
I want to make it very clear that all of this is purely fiction. Obviously, what the girls are doing to Riley is awful and wrong beyond measure. This story mostly comes from fantasies of mine and my own imagination of being in ...
- Sun Nov 17, 2024 11:44 pm
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- Mon Nov 18, 2024 6:15 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/17)
What does it matter. In the whole ride of the story Riley has been seen by so many people that almost every birthmark is known by so many people.
Ah well it is true she has been seen by several students in person and the college's nearby surroundings, there is a HUGE difference between that ...
- Tue Nov 19, 2024 3:59 am
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Re: Extreme Therapy - Book 1 Complete Book 2 Chapter 20 Posted (11/14/2024)
Thanks Bucker. I’ve finally worked out some time on my schedule for writing. I hope to have this story finished in the next few weeks so I can start working on the one we discussedBucket wrote: Fri Nov 15, 2024 5:59 pm Good to see you back in action, Edith, and thanks for the new chapter!
- Wed Nov 20, 2024 2:59 am
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The Photoshoot: Part 9 - Hit the Road
The door closed behind me, and I took in a deep, ragged breath. I couldn’t breathe, I couldn’t think. My fingers were trembling, clinging to my wallet, keys, and phone.
It was pitch-black, but that didn’t matter. The fact that I was nearly completely naked outside made me feel completely exposed ...
It was pitch-black, but that didn’t matter. The fact that I was nearly completely naked outside made me feel completely exposed ...
- Sat Nov 23, 2024 8:19 am
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Chapter 45
The next morning dawned too early, the sun's rays piercing through the curtains and painting stripes across the floor. Riley's eyes snapped open, her body tense and alert as the events of the night came flooding back to her. The memory of the cold finger in her ass, the taste of Rachel ...
The next morning dawned too early, the sun's rays piercing through the curtains and painting stripes across the floor. Riley's eyes snapped open, her body tense and alert as the events of the night came flooding back to her. The memory of the cold finger in her ass, the taste of Rachel ...
- Sat Nov 23, 2024 7:27 pm
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Re: The Unraveling (New 11/23)
I’m looking forward to hearing what you think of themBucket wrote: Sat Nov 23, 2024 4:20 pm Thanks for the new chapter, Emily! Can't wait to read the latest two!

- Sun Nov 24, 2024 9:28 pm
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The Last Straw - Chapter 17
Sending a muffled cry into her rope gag, she started running toward the barn – the only refuge in sight. But she only made it a step or so before her head was jerked around. The lead rope running from her mouth had been pulled taut. Percy’s firm grip on the other end made him the arbiter of how far ...