Search found 62 matches

Return

by BareB4U
Sun Feb 02, 2025 8:06 am
Jump to forum
Jump to topic

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 8 - 1 Feb)

Cam's shorts are tied tight in a triple knot now, remember. Having been pantsed one and a half times, he isn't taking any chances. They aren't coming off him easily...
by BareB4U
Wed Feb 05, 2025 9:53 pm
Jump to forum
Jump to topic

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

PART 9: CONSEQUENCES

Ellie quickly pulled her bikini top back on, staring at the back of Cameron’s head as she did so. Both teens were red-faced, Cameron’s with guilt at what he had just done, Ellie’s with both embarrassment and anger.

In truth, Ellie had dreamt of one day showing her breasts to ...
by BareB4U
Wed Feb 05, 2025 9:55 pm
Jump to forum
Jump to topic

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)


I’d like to point out an absolute BRILLIANT writing tool you’ve implemented with the wrist bands that indicate allowed time.
It signifies that there is a definitive end, so all you need to do is fill time.
It’s something I wish I’d remember to utilize more often.


Glad you clocked the built-in ...
by BareB4U
Wed Feb 05, 2025 11:29 pm
Jump to forum
Jump to topic

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)


Smile...you're on Cameron Cam.
Poor boy is in a bit of a pickle.
Those lifeguards didn't notice all those nakey kids running around?! Jack could have been stopped and made to explain himself.


I actually had a moment in there where Jack encountered one of the lifeguards on his way to the ...
by BareB4U
Wed Feb 05, 2025 11:34 pm
Jump to forum
Jump to topic

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)


Another wonderful chapter. I do hope Ellie also gets to see everything like Hannah. She always just seems to miss our and only see Cameron’s rear!


She hasn't even gotten a particularly good look at Cameron's rear! She's seen it from a distance from up on the stairs, then through the water, but ...
by BareB4U
Fri Feb 07, 2025 8:19 am
Jump to forum
Jump to topic

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

I've made a couple of small changes to the end of the most recent chapter, as it seems from these comments that I hadn't written it as clearly as it needed to be.

Yes, Ellie is in the cubicle next door, along with Mia.

No, she hasn't got a peek yet.

Only Mia is looking over the barrier at present ...
by BareB4U
Fri Feb 07, 2025 6:50 pm
Jump to forum
Jump to topic

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)


Though I must say, I think Hannah also deserves some exposure :D


By the end of this story, Hannah will not have had everything go her own way. I have something planned for her. I'll say no more than that. 😈


I've enjoyed the story, and like that the story seems to have come full circle, with ...
by BareB4U
Sun Feb 09, 2025 4:34 pm
Jump to forum
Jump to topic

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 9 - 5 Feb)

Sorry folks, my available writing time has somewhat run away from me this weekend. :cry: I won't be posting Part 10 today, but I PROMISE I will post it tomorrow.

Don't go thinking it's all about to reach a climax (ahem) tomorrow though. Part 10 is not the final part. You know how I like to drag ...
by BareB4U
Mon Feb 10, 2025 9:37 pm
Jump to forum
Jump to topic

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 10 - 10 Feb)

PART 10: CLOSE QUARTERS, CLOSE EXAMINATION

This was a whole new level of problem for Cameron. At least in the pool there hadn’t been any phones around. “Stop that!” he demanded, indignant at Mia’s intrusion. He reached up to try to block the camera lens and grab Mia’s phone from her hand, taking ...
by BareB4U
Wed Feb 12, 2025 9:21 pm
Jump to forum
Jump to topic

Re: Sharing a Changing Cubicle at the Pool (Part 10 -10 Feb)

"Hannie" is an affectionate/familiar nickname, used most often by Mary but also by Cameron (who also sometimes calls her "Han").

It's like Cameron being shortened to "Cam" and Ellie occasionally shortened to "El". Mia's name is short enough already, so she doesn't get a nickname. :lol:

Sorry for ...