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Amazing chapter. I will say I was shocked Amy and Lizzie kept true to their word even with Lizzie knowing about him being involved with Simon last Christmas. I kept waiting for the tables to turn haha. I'm not disappointed but just a testament to your great writing skills that keeps me guessing ...

Great chapter! The twist on Simon's secret was good but I still don't like him as a character so I'm curious how much "revenge" Amy is going to deliver once she finds out he has nothing to be embarrassed about poor older brother

Great chapter. This is why I love your stories. Even though I don't agree with Simon's secret (because once the girls get a look his insecurity won't be as heightened) in my opinion. You still find a way to keep me entertained and the cliffhanger so good! Even though I still hate Simon I'll settle ...

6 chapters in and still loving the story! Comeuppance stories are my favorite and you write it so well. I know you already have it written out but these are my semi delusional hopes. Both of them get super embarrassed with a lot of interaction from the non-family audience and then aunt Jill's ...

Short post but I remember my friend had two girls over in high school so we would of been around 16 at the time. His parents were divorced so his mom kinda just gave him free reign as long as it stayed in the basement/house. Really laid back. Anyways, we played beer pong (yes the real way) and it ...

Awesome story all around! It does have some satisfaction as a reader to start from the beginning and stick around until the end so I can only imagine as a writer! I wish I could pick up the story for you because I do like the characters you created and developed. I fear I wouldn't do it justice ...

No sadly we drifted apart after a couple of months. But still a great memory! As far as a photo we didn't want to scare them away so you could say we settled for less haha

Great chapter! I know you said you already had an outline and not taking suggestions so this is just my reader thoughts out loud....I wonder if Charlie is really ok with it and wants to play along in the prank or if this is an elaborate plan to get some harmless prank revenge on Sam when the time is ...

Another excellent chapter! I love the dynamic that Sam's friend has popular viewpoint of Theo's tiny problem but Sam isn't quite ready to believe that. Maybe after an extended look instead of a quick glance?? Either way the cliffhanger at the end is soo good! I'm so torn if I want Sam to be exposed ...

The cliffhanger was diabolical. Sam has been pushing her luck and maybe this is karma for her discussing different sizes with her friend I also love how her downfall came from an innocent thought/action from Nathan. Great chapter!