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Excellent start!

steam train wrote: Thu May 22, 2025 6:48 am Excellent start!

Agreed! Can't wait to see where this goes

Daniels narrative wrote:
"I need you to explicitly promise to follow all our usual rules. You know what they are."

Can't wait to find out what this set of rules happens to be.

How old is Max?
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Great start on this story for your first posting here.

Hey folks.

Disclaimer: This is a fictional story that involves corruption, groping, blackmail and other hard stuff.

Since this is my first story, I would appreciate any feedback.


Part 1:
"Really? He tried to peek at you again?", asked Anna, shocked.

"Yeah, while I was changing in my room. But ...

Emily’s embarrassing problems
by Vanessa Evans

When I was about 3, my mother took me to see our doctor because I kept getting a red rash all over my body and I was fainting a lot. He fobbed my mother off with all sorts of remedies; none of which worked. After about 6 months he admitted defeat and ...

Very interesting start. I love the verbal descriptions you are using in many of your paragraphs which enhance the imagery in the readers' minds enabling us to depict the scenes you are writing much better.

I am seriously loving June, the girlfriend/wife want-to-be. What a great antagonist she is to ...

at 13 years old, Kate is a little behind in physical development. It may be better if she let other people assume she is younger than
to admit her real age.


Huh? I could change each character's year by a couple of years. I wanted to start writing this story with young characters just because ...

Really nice story. I was not sure what to make of June at first, and now I'm actually wondering what a story would be like if it was a genuinely clueless but sweet stepmother who is just too nice to say no to, lol.
The only part that felt a little odd was the logistics of the swimsuit. How do you ...

Very interesting start! I don't mind younger characters in stories like yours. What I liked most was June's quick thinking in buying the pictures for later use. I think Kate is in for a lot of embarrassing tasks her touchy step-mom will come up for her to complete in order to keep the pictures from ...

The Traditional Family Association: a club where like minded parents gathered to reinforce proper values.

I love this idea. I wrote a similar one in an ENM story. Parents, mostly moms and aunts, are resistant to modern society requiring boys be
covered at all times, even at the beach. These parents ...