Pantsing and Stripping Forums

Great writing. Loved it!

I published this story on another site a little while back. Hopefully members here will enjoy it too... ________________________________________ Paul had not had a good week at school. He'd always been thought of as a bit of an odd loner, but then he'd been caught standing on a box trying (unsucces...

Nice continuation.
Will Debbie be recognised out in public in such a revealing outfit? Can't wait to find out.

Mike and Sarah had no idea that their conversation was being overheard by Anna Jenkins, who was standing just the other side of the bookshelves as they talked honestly about their feelings for each other. Sarah, a class president, enjoyed helping out in the High School library a couple of times a we...

Sorry to hear Debbi has been unwell. Glad she's better now.
Look forward to any new writing, whether this tale or a new project.

Mike

He could blackmail her into performing a striptease for him and his friends.

This is a story I wrote in collaboration with debbiefan . Despite being on crutches, Penny stands up to bullies. Karl & Penny were on a long weekend camping trip (Friday to Monday), to the countryside with two other couples: Paul & Haley, and Nathan & Anna. Unfortunately, on just their ...

One thing I'd suggest is to start a new paragraph for each new speaker. This has the added benefit of breaking the story up so it's more readable.

Look forward to reading more.

Your 24 y/o sister is 6' 9" ? Wow!

Loved this story!
She'll never live that down at work.