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Disclaimer: Hi all this is my first work. And english is not my native language. Don't be afraid to make comments and even make some amendments to the text.

Chapter 1. The bet

The room was quiet, except for the nervous pounding of my heart, so loud that I was sure Sarah could hear it from across ...

Disclaimer: Hi all this is my first work. And english is not my native language. Don't be afraid to make comments and even make some amendments to the text.

Chapter 1. The bet

The room was quiet, except for the nervous pounding of my heart, so loud that I was sure Sarah could hear it from across ...

## Chapter 1

The city hummed with quiet efficiency, its streets lined with sleek electric transports that glided past towering glass buildings. Digital billboards flickered with government announcements—reminders of civic duty, public health alerts, and the ever-present countdown to the next Life ...

English is not my native language so any comments are welcome. Not about language too :)

## Chapter 4

Anna woke to a cold dread settling in her stomach. Last night's mandatory viewing of the National Fertility Channel lingered in her mind—her failure to achieve climax during the program might be ...

## Chapter 5

The morning light spilled through Anna’s windows, harsh and unfiltered. She groaned, rolling onto her side, only to freeze at the vibration of her wristband. A notification from **Dr. Sorokina** flashed across the screen.

*"Good morning, Anna. Excellent progress yesterday—your ...

## Chapter 6

The alarm shrieked, splitting the morning quiet. Anna slapped it silent, her eyes scratchy with exhaustion. Her stomach churned with the knowledge of what the day demanded. *NROC*. That damned appointment, summoned like a misbehaving student to the headmaster's office.

She dragged ...

I have several options for the continuation of the story in my head and I want to know your opinion.:
1. Did Anna break down and start trying public nudity herself, or is she still struggling with her desires?
2. Does the first sex have to take place, or has she not overcome her vaginismus yet?

written in a hurry :) comments are welcome

## Chapter 7

Anna's apartment glowed with the sterile blue light of her computer monitors in the pre-dawn darkness. She hadn't slept. Couldn't sleep. Her fingers flew across the keyboard while her mind raced even faster, oscillating between self-disgust ...

## Chapter 8

The fluorescent lights flickered on with a harsh buzz, dragging Anna from a fitful sleep. She blinked against the sterile glare, her body stiff from the narrow cot. The gown had ridden up during the night, leaving her thighs exposed to the cold air.

The door hissed open. Dr. Sorokina ...

male patients can simply receive some kind of treatment. any problems with erection or other male diseases and so on. It is common centre so it can help with diseases.
Im using both languages some pieces of text direct on english some on russian and then I translate them.