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She who has the clothes and the paper n pen make the rules.
I really don't see how the poor boy can win, not when he's two penalty points behind already.

It's great to have new writers here. Awesome first story.
Hopefully there will be many more to cum (since this boy couldn't cum).

Take your time.
You’re a great writer.
Give this awesome story an ending you’re proud of.
But don’t be too harsh on yourself

Maybe focus on this story for a bit.
Give ‘Bullies’ a break.
Sometimes you gotta change it up

Great twist in the story and he has some hope.

Still going

Another wonderful chapter. Very high quality writing, thank you. I doubt he has a chance of winning but there is certainly a great reward to strive for.

In fact I would argue it would almost be too stereotypical if he was to lose just as the timer was about to run out.


That's a great point, actually. I suppose we'll find out how much of an ENM purist I am... or not! ;)


I hope you’re not too much of a purist:) I have always enjoyed mixing ...

Oh, this is SO happening!
Great job and great tease!
Keep it up!
Maybe there’s still another opportunity to see HER naked.
But could he even handle that?

We all knew James didn't have a chance, but how humiliating can it get.
Hopefully something happens we can't predict.