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Fantastic start, and a great description as well. I hope the second chapter will follow shortly.

For a first story that is pretty damn good! Can't wait for subsequent chapters.

Excellent start. Surely there will be some jumping jacks, situps, and jogging. But eventually, they will play basketball. Shirts and skins. We know which team will pick her, and the rules are rules and must be complied with.

Very very nice. I love the details portrayed in this story. Surely, she has to lose the shirt at some point.

I loved the way you write the reactions to her nudity- to a female-starved class of boys, a naked girl truly is a gift from God unlike any other

Jason Cross wrote: Sun Oct 12, 2025 2:19 pm Thank you, guys, for your feedback. This writing experience is new and hard for me so I appreciate each comment

If this is hard for you now, I can’t wait for your story when it become easy for you.