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Although I can understand some of the criticism in a previous post of the slow build-up of the story, I personally think that this is exactly what sets this story apart from others, and that it is entirely positive. Your writing style creates anticipation and a keen interest in reading the next ...

Another great chapter, not just a very good thoroughly description of the modelling process but also a very good description of the transition of Emma from a nervous unexperienced first-timer into a truly relaxed aspiring model. I really enjoy that your story is so detailed in every necessary aspect ...

Oh, I suppose that’s what you’d call a real cliffhanger — I just hope I get to read the next part soon!

It's so easy to get distracted by those naked hot Swedish girls, so I'm glad you still pulled off writing another great chapter about Emma becoming one of them.

Finally, we get to meet the mysterious legend Bashō Aikō, and what a meeting it was. I really like the way you describe details so accurately and realistically, such as this special feature of reading certain types of Japanese books backwards.

When they leafed through the photo albums, it was like ...