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Hello! I’m a long time lurker and first time writer. I have never written anything outside of school in my life. I have a lot of ideas for this story, but before I continue I was hoping for some feedback in terms of the writing. Is it easy enough to follow? I had no idea writing characters talking ...

I would love a sense of her having to use her passport or birth certificate as toilet paper to wipe her pussy clean like the hid her toilet rags and find the next best thing and then burn them after use



I’m really hyped for the next chapter I hope it is soon they should do like a cookie sale ...

I would love a sense of her having to use her passport or birth certificate as toilet paper to wipe her pussy clean like the hid her toilet rags and find the next best thing and then burn them after use



I’m really hyped for the next chapter I hope it is soon they should do like a cookie ...

Background and warnings: This is a story I have had living in my head for a few weeks now. It will be a long one, with character development and various subplots. I decided not to use any of the actual photographers’ names, as many of them are still living, but this story is inspired by the host of ...

Prologue

Nedim slouched in his chair, the soft glow of the computer screen washing over his face. Yes, that was the photographer’s name. At least, that’s who the photographer was SUPPOSED to be. Bashō Aikō files. Nedim knew it would almost certainly be a massive failure. He was not sure he could ...

I wasn't expecting such a dead-on depiction of what it's like trying to use the internet these days. Everything's gone, all those memories. Totally harmless, totally legal things, straight-up art... all of it swept away. And not even just controversial things, but entire swaths of internet are just ...

A very different story, and I really liked the premise. The desperation is palpable and very well written

Hermione finds herself at the mercy of Slytherin students.
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It was late in the evening, and 3rd year Hogwarts student, Hermione Granger, stood nervously outside the plain stone wall entrance to the Slytherin common room, daring herself to say the password she'd learned ...

Good start. Though I must ask, did you have to forcibly reject the clinical terms for female anatomy (e.g. vagina, vulva, etc...) in order to emphasize the slang (e.g. kitty)? For me, the slang just feels a lot dirtier and trashier (not cuter), and vagina just sounds more appealing to me.

Also ...

Still holding out hope. Maybe she can be rented out to the sex ed class at school as a "smash test dummy?"