That is under writers discretion whatever your comfortable with.NudeBaG wrote: Sun Mar 02, 2025 8:25 pm So, I’m currently writing the chapter with Mark being in control of the girls.
How far is TOO far?
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- Mon Mar 03, 2025 1:14 am
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- Mon Mar 03, 2025 8:10 pm
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That's awesome, NudeBag! Can't wait to read the next part.
- Mon Mar 03, 2025 11:49 pm
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I'm super excited to see how kinky the cover get.
- Mon Mar 03, 2025 11:58 pm
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I really want to see how pervy and kinky Mark can be. Will he get back at the girls for all the exposure they caused him to? I’m curious will this night lead to any more power dynamics between Christine and Emily.
- Tue Mar 04, 2025 12:13 am
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I can see it being a tricky one to write yeah.
Mark is obviously a good person essentially and it wouldn't feel right for him to humiliate the girls on purpose, even though he'd probably be within his rights to do that after all the embarrassments they've caused him. He just seems too nice to do ...
Mark is obviously a good person essentially and it wouldn't feel right for him to humiliate the girls on purpose, even though he'd probably be within his rights to do that after all the embarrassments they've caused him. He just seems too nice to do ...
- Tue Mar 04, 2025 12:26 am
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How many more rituals are there going to be?
This upcoming chapter has gotten me very excited to see what happens and if Christine is something to look forward to? Count me in!
Is it humiliation or a pleasure, or both?
This upcoming chapter has gotten me very excited to see what happens and if Christine is something to look forward to? Count me in!
Is it humiliation or a pleasure, or both?
- Tue Mar 04, 2025 12:50 am
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I tried it 4 different ways, and each time, it felt wrong.
It felt ‘too’ exploitative/one sided.
It’s not like Mark wants ‘revenge’,
I just had to figure out HOW things would play out.
Still working on it, but I think I’m happy with it✌🏻
Christine fans should be happy😅
When I said get back, I ...
- Tue Mar 04, 2025 6:03 pm
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An amazing chapter! Mark did almost take it a step too far but I think the ending to it leaves us in a great spot. Before they had mark cumming because they wanted to. Now mark will be making them make him cum because he wants to! Amazing chapter! You handled it well.
- Tue Mar 04, 2025 7:04 pm
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A very interesting chapter indeed. Mark may be in control but only up to as much as the girls allow him to be in control.
- Tue Mar 04, 2025 7:47 pm
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I would have the girls regain control over Mark and continue his embarrassment. That's just me though.