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by Mark Paren
Sun Jan 11, 2026 7:18 pm
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Re: The Escape Artist - chapter 3 Jan. 9


There is no queue.


Maybe I’m wrong then. I thought if somebody made a comment like “bump”, it jumped you to the top of the list. Isn’t that how it works? To me, legitimate comments are fine but I’m not comfortable with manipulating the list. I don’t care if other people do it and I think it’s ...
by Mark Paren
Tue Jan 13, 2026 10:18 pm
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Re: New swimming trunks

I’ve got to admit, I’m feeling bad for the kid. Seems like a traumatizing event.
by Mark Paren
Wed Jan 14, 2026 3:28 am
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Re: New swimming trunks


If Mr. Smethers were a Miss Smethers then hardly anybody would have an issue with this.
A wee bit of a double standard, though some would still find it creepy with an old woman.

I don't know what the cutoff age would be that turns a situation like this from erotic/arousing (younger woman) to ...
by Mark Paren
Wed Jan 14, 2026 10:18 pm
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Re: Magic (New 1-12-2026)

Can we expect a new chapter soon?
by Mark Paren
Thu Jan 15, 2026 6:49 pm
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Re: Magic (New 1-12-2026)

I usually outline my stories, even kink stories. I always feel a sense of satisfaction when I arrive at the closing chapter. Have fun with it.
by Mark Paren
Fri Jan 16, 2026 3:39 am
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Re: The Escape Artist - chapter 3 Jan. 9


I don't do this very often, but sometimes I do "Bump" a story by posting: "I hope we get a new chapter soon on this great story."

Technically I guess that is a bump, but a polite one.

I agree, but a legitimate comment is different from a bump. Just to be clear, I don’t mind if other people ...
by Mark Paren
Fri Jan 16, 2026 5:14 pm
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Re: The Escape Artist - (chapter 4 Jan. 16)

Chapter 4

Matt was standing in front of the entire school, with his hands tied behind his back, his ankles securely bound together and he was naked. As bad as this situation was, his discomfort was magnified because he was aroused and on the edge of an embarrassing ejaculation. A girl he hardly ...
by Mark Paren
Fri Jan 16, 2026 9:29 pm
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Re: The Escape Artist - chapter 4 Jan. 16


If this is the end of the story, that’s fine!
It’s a perfectly satisfying and sweet end.
Maybe an epilogue of sorts could be in order though?

I could always revisit these characters someday, but I think their story is complete for now. I’d rather end a story too early than too late. Thanks for ...
by Mark Paren
Sat Jan 17, 2026 2:28 am
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Re: Magic (New 1-16-2026)

Fascinating chapter. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
by Mark Paren
Sat Jan 17, 2026 7:31 pm
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Re: The Escape Artist - chapter 4 Jan. 16


Some sort of conclusion that explores Matt's situation socially in school would be appropriate. After all, many students not only saw his erect penis and a very ill-timed emission. The lockerroom atmosphere in and of itself would be informative.

Maybe a ‘Repercussions’, chapter would tie up ...