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by alberic
Fri Aug 07, 2026 10:58 pm
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Re: Layla's new world



Interesting setup, I'd love to read more.

Some paragraphs would be nice. It's very hard to follow with everything mashed together.


Thanks for the input! I have made some changes, hopefully it reads a little easier now.


It's better. Thanks.

As a general rule, you should not have more ...
by geo1234
Sat Aug 08, 2026 5:49 pm
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Re: Layla's new world

Awesome story. Please continue it!
by Freesub
Sun Aug 09, 2026 4:22 am
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Re: Layla's new world

Really fun concept, where the girl herself if enjoying the exposure and prolonging it. Would be fun to see if she accidentally runs into a boy she knows, turning it from enjoyable to embarassing :lol:

I also wonder if she'll be nude around the house morez and how the dad will react to that.
by alberic
Sun Aug 09, 2026 12:29 pm
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Re: Layla's new world parts 1-2

I'm enjoying this one a lot.
ChuckFin84 wrote: Sun Aug 09, 2026 5:06 am I learned that I had the freedom to roam around the house however I wanted. I just had to make sure I knew if he had friends coming over.
Sounds promising. :twisted:
ChuckFin84 wrote: Sun Aug 09, 2026 5:06 am This was going to be a long and difficult week.
I bet. :D
by Freesub
Sun Aug 09, 2026 4:14 pm
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Re: Layla's new world parts 1-2

Damn that escalated quickly! But I'm not complaining :lol:
by jojo12026
Thu Aug 13, 2026 12:02 am
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Re: Layla's new world: parts 1-3

Too far? Meh.... I never will be or never have been an 11 or old girl. I DO like that she has some control. In most of the stories on here the protagonist usually has no control over anything. Which can be great - my bookmark list would show. This is refreshing in a way.
by alberic
Fri Aug 21, 2026 10:09 pm
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Re: Layla's new world: parts 1-4

I really liked this one. Best chapter yet. :twisted: