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by alberic
Tue Aug 04, 2026 5:26 pm
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Re: Lia's new reality part 22


The head coach looked to Trevor, who nodded to them.

SLAP!

The head coach, who was also the PE teacher, spanked Lia. She had been a problem student for him, so he felt like she deserved it. But he didn’t hit her very hard. But still, the girl cried out. Never in a million years did he think he ...
by alberic
Fri Aug 07, 2026 4:24 pm
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Re: Layla's new world

Interesting setup, I'd love to read more.

Some paragraphs would be nice. It's very hard to follow with everything mashed together.
by alberic
Fri Aug 07, 2026 10:58 pm
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Re: Layla's new world



Interesting setup, I'd love to read more.

Some paragraphs would be nice. It's very hard to follow with everything mashed together.


Thanks for the input! I have made some changes, hopefully it reads a little easier now.


It's better. Thanks.

As a general rule, you should not have more ...
by alberic
Sun Aug 09, 2026 12:29 pm
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Re: Layla's new world parts 1-2

I'm enjoying this one a lot.
ChuckFin84 wrote: Sun Aug 09, 2026 5:06 am I learned that I had the freedom to roam around the house however I wanted. I just had to make sure I knew if he had friends coming over.
Sounds promising. :twisted:
ChuckFin84 wrote: Sun Aug 09, 2026 5:06 am This was going to be a long and difficult week.
I bet. :D
by alberic
Fri Aug 14, 2026 12:00 pm
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Re: Heather Mulqueany [Chapter 12 posted 8/4/26]

I'll bump it because my previous reply got approved late and got lost on the previous page.

Really great story. I love this. And I hope it gets continued (and escalated further.)
Heather should be spending more quality time with Uncle Tony. ;)
by alberic
Sun Aug 16, 2026 7:55 am
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Re: My Big Break (New 8/13)

I am only through the fourth chapter, but I cannot help but make an observation. I really like the premise, the characters, the story and the pacing, but...

As someone who also uses AI to help me write, it feels familiar. As if every piece of pretentious fluff that tries to sound profound but ...
by alberic
Tue Aug 18, 2026 11:20 am
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Re: Lia's new reality (Part 25 - (8/17)

Great chapter!

I'd still like to see some acknowledgment of Steve's personal enjoyment/arousal, but I am writing my own story that will lean heavily in that direction.

In the meantime, I am thoroughly enjoying this story for what it is.
by alberic
Thu Aug 20, 2026 12:53 pm
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Polly Did A Bad Bad Thing (Chapter 3 - 9/4)

Polly Did A Bad Bad Thing


A Variation on a Theme

Thirteen-year-old Polly and her friend Emma get caught doing a bad thing, and they are punished by their families with having to be naked and getting spanked. Initially inspired by the wonderful “ Lia’s New Reality ” by Perseus, as well as many ...
by alberic
Thu Aug 20, 2026 12:57 pm
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Re: Polly Did A Bad Bad Thing

Chapter 1

Elena dangled two wine glasses upside-down between the fingers of one hand and held an opened bottle in the other as she sauntered back into the living room. She nudged Gary's socked foot off the coffee table with her own. "Move, ogre. You're hogging the whole couch again."

"I am ...
by alberic
Thu Aug 20, 2026 2:12 pm
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Re: Doing Things the HOA Way (Chapter 2 - Aug 15)

superevil7 wrote: Thu Aug 20, 2026 1:17 pm it bothers me a lot to leave stories unfinished, but the most fun I have writing is when I have a new idea.
I can totally relate to that. :lol: :oops: