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Chapter 60

The first wave didn't feel like pleasure; it felt like an ambush. The relentless, high-frequency hum of the silicone bullet acted as a drill, boring through Riley's defenses until the tension in her lower abdomen snapped. Her back arched violently, the nylon ropes biting into her ...

"Can I get you something to drink?" I asked our neighbor Frank. He was seated calmly at my house, in our living room. He wasn't that bad looking. His nose had obviously been broken at some point in his life, and his hands were calloused from blue collar work. He wasn't exactly my type.

"No, thank ...

So it turns out that this isn't the last chapter - this one was longer than expected, and I decided to break it into two parts.

Chapter 16 - Data Tampering

“So you think it was Jenny who sent that email?” Annie asked, a look of incredulity on her face.

“She all but admitted that it was her. She ...

The worst part was the waiting. No, scratch that. The worst part was being lashed naked and helpless to a freaking school desk! ...and having to count down the seconds to your ultimate humiliation.

She had little control over the situation, but with some effort, Callie could still serve her nude ...

Brooke is the first to arrive at the meeting which is in the center of campus. On this particular night the park where the founders statue is located is deserted which is also true for the area surrounding it. It’s a warm summer night with a light breeze, the sky is clouded and the moon occasionally ...

The living room smelled of salt-and-vinegar crisps and cheap nail polish. Emma sat on the edge of the plush cream sofa, her fingers twisting the fabric of her oversized grey hoodie. Her shoulder-length brown hair was in a neat ponytail, hanging over her left shoulder. Around her, Kaylee, Mia, Chloe ...

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I'm sorry it took so long but here is the revised version of chapter 6.
It needed by far the most editing to get it to a point where I was happy with it. :oops:

As stated previously, chapter 7 will see the greatest changes to the actual plot, but as promised I will let you guys ...

Synopsis

For years, fifteen-year-old Melody Tanzer has chased victory at her school's talent show, her exceptional singing and dancing always falling just short of the top prize. This year, she's determined to win, planning a provocative routine to a Japanese pop song that requires a daring ...

Chapter 6
Cat stood in the window for another 20 minutes. Nobody walked by, and the boys hadn’t even noticed her standing there. She watched as the boys rough-housed with the piles of leaves they had raked up; Bradly jumped into the big pile, causing it to go all over, and Scott scolded him for ...

Great start! This is a fun idea to explore. Can't wait to read what happens next.