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While we're criticizing, you don't need that trigger warning stuff. I'm sure most of us here are trying to pretend it's not 2024 and that is an unwelcome reminder. Great story by the way, quite unique

Wait did you misunderstand? I didn't mean remove the content, i meant you don't need the warning. Like you said, it's common. And the other criticism was about tense consistency.

I feel like this needs to be said as a reminder to both our dear readers and authors.

First our readers, thank you greatly for reading our stories, some of them may not be to your liking, and some may even weird you out, that's normal, humans have different tastes, sometimes to a wild degree, so it ...

Can we just get this guys IP address banned already so he stops doing this spam stupid posts on all threads?

The shrill ring of the phone sliced through the Saturday morning quiet like a chainsaw through butter. Joanna Cooper wiped her hands on a dishcloth and sighed, wondering who could be calling at this hour when most sensible people were still nursing their first cup of coffee.

"Cooper residence," she ...

Elena pulled back from her daughters and fixed Zuri with a stern look. "Before we leave, I need your word. Promise me you'll behave while staying with the Coopers."

Zuri nodded quickly, desperate for this moment to end, but her mother wasn't satisfied.

"Verbal response, Zuri. And I need you to ...

Chapter 10

Simon Says has a lot more strategy than people think. It’s a game of playing on expectations. Some people do really well as “Simon” because they know how to get people to fall into a pattern and then throw a wrench into what they’re expecting. Some people think too much between commands ...

Does anyone have any idea what has been going on with this site? I've been all but locked out of even getting on here lately because of FOUR different error messages that I have been receiving. I fully expect to receive a message when I try to enter this telling me "You do not have permission to ...

New part should be ready soon :) I took some time away but feeling excited to share more.

Would you all rather me mostly keep to what really happened or fictionalize the story more to make it a bit more exciting?

I’d love to hear any thoughts and feedback!


Perhaps you can fictionalize it ...

Alex quickly slipped on her socks and shoes at her locker, trying to hurry away from school as fast as possible. She was relieved that the school day was finally over. Now she could go home and hide in her room, until this dreaded day was through. As she bent over to tie her shoes, she couldn't help ...