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I wouldn't worry about criticism over minute details. You have done marvelous job and I hope you continue with the story. It certainly doesn't seem like you have lost your path to me.

If you are worried about a particular detail in a chapter you can always use the edit function (the pencil icon at ...

Definitely have not lost your way. I think this is a great story so far. And hope it continues for many more parts

I may not be conveying these ideas as effectively as I think when I'm writing it, the story is already 4 parts longer than I originally planned so maybe I'm losing the path a bit.


I couldn't be happier with the way this story is going. I just use my imagination for any details not mentioned. It ...

rrh62 wrote: Thu Feb 01, 2024 3:38 pm I certainly hope this is not an indication that you're planning to kill the story soon. I strongly believe it has a potential for a 40+ chapter saga.

I totally agree!!

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My apologies to the few folks who were so patient and supportive with my last story, "A Small Price to Pay". Some people are able to just write and write, and the well just never seems to run dry (I'm looking at you, NeverDoubted!) I, unfortunately, hit long stretches where the idea just doesn't ...

“Alright, let’s begin.” Ms. Honey said, standing on the stage of the Grandview Middle School auditorium. Nine naked women and girls were all about to take part in her health presentation, one that was about to take place in front of the entire student body of the school. Ms. Honey had gathered a ...

Once they returned home, Lia was allowed the rest of the day to herself. Her mom didn't give her the usual chores; she mostly started in her room to read or watch TV. The main thing that kept it from being a normal lazy day was that Lia was still naked. She knew that she wouldn’t be getting any ...

" I’m taking you with me to the campaign office tomorrow.” Steve told her.

Chapter 11 has a lot of promise. Chapter 10 is chock full of surprises, with every chapter providing more than expected. What if Bruce has a summer internship at Steve's office as a campaign volunteer? Then there is Claire ...

Excellent chapter! I love the way you had Lia beg everyone to be allowed to cum. It's interesting how you're portraying her starting to slowly accept her reluctant exhibitionist side, having to think about her previous exposures in order to get off. I'm looking forward to seeing what you put her ...

The only thing that means is she probably will be naked up to school, and who knows what going to happen because I doubt she will make it through the whole rest of summer without issues happening to make it worse for herself. Maybe she will be the only naked in school too LOL


One of the things ...