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by mars357
Wed Jun 07, 2023 12:37 pm
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Re: Boyd vs Girls Sequel — Let the Punishment Fit the Crime


I literally just made an account to say that I'm loving this series. Hoping we get Piper forced to go out in public as part of her extended punishment.


Thank you, that's very kind of you :) I hope I shan't disappoint! Writing more slowly now due to work and life stuff coming up.

Chapter 6 ...
by mars357
Wed Jun 14, 2023 2:35 pm
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Chapter 7 — Best Behaviour

That was the plan, anyway. My eyes, however, didn’t want to be closed. And I couldn’t even pretend to be lying there in a daze, half asleep. I was far, far too excited for it. My eyes kept opening, focus gliding all over Ally’s and Jenny’s naked bodies as they stood ...
by mars357
Wed Jun 28, 2023 2:49 pm
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Re: Boyd vs Girls Sequel — Let the Punishment Fit the Crime

Thank you for bumping the thread and reminding me it has readers who would miss it. Here's the next installment:

Chapter 8. ⁠— Lucky


Jenny gasped. She looked as stupefied as I was—whether it was more by my brazen conditions or by Ally’s hasty and unconditional acceptance of them, I couldn’t ...
by mars357
Wed Jul 12, 2023 9:20 pm
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Chapter 9—The worst brats

It turned out that Mrs Henkins gave herself a pretty bad midday hangover and a slight sunstroke. She poked her head out a little while later and shoved a slightly excessive wad of cash into my hands. She seemed completely past caring when she found me on the receiving ...
by mars357
Wed Aug 30, 2023 7:42 pm
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Re: Boyd vs Girls Sequel — Let the Punishment Fit the Crime

Apologies for the long delay with this chapter. I was travelling, busy, and hit a writer's block. But I haven't given up!

Chapter 10. ⁠— Out and about

“Mum’s gonna kill you if she catches us sleeping in the same bed,” grumbled Jenny as I closed the door behind us.

“I doubt your mum’s catching ...
by Executionus
Wed Jul 09, 2025 9:42 am
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Re: What a Time to Recall! (Parts 1+2 now available)

I don't think posting a spoiler for the ending does much good, but it's possible that CaughtofLore might give someone else permission to write up the final part of this story using an outline he draws up. I still remember the gist of the original prediction post way back when and it didn't really ...
by Executionus
Sat Jul 12, 2025 3:27 am
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Re: What a Time to Recall! (Parts 1+2 now available)


As Executionus suggested, I’d not be against someone else writing a conclusion if they so wanted. Heck, I have a bunch of fragments from my first draft of the next chapter (that contain a bunch of gaps and peter out to a few bullet points toward the end), and if someone wanted to use those as a ...
by DrWhoFanJ
Sat Jul 12, 2025 12:54 pm
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As Executionus suggested, I’d not be against someone else writing a conclusion if they so wanted. Heck, I have a bunch of fragments from my first draft of the next chapter (that contain a bunch of gaps and peter out to a few bullet points toward the end), and if someone wanted to use those as a ...
by Executionus
Wed Jul 16, 2025 7:00 am
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Re: What a Time to Recall! (Parts 1+2 now available)

Well you're in luck.... I got the notes earlier today and there is WAY more to work with than I expected. This isn't going to all conclude in a single part. My guess right now is that it'll end up being three more parts. COL wrote enough in disconnected rough draft scenes to make up about 90% of ...
by littl1p
Tue Apr 26, 2022 12:24 am
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Accidental new career

I have an ENM/sph story idea that I had fantasized about for years but felt I wasn't a strong enough writer. I still feel that after writing it :P. I will apologize up front for the bazillion run on sentences. If it gets hard to understand, I tried to take some of the advice a few folks gave me on ...