covid LOCKDOWN (ENM Story) with 2 friends.

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covid LOCKDOWN (ENM Story) with 2 friends.

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pls respond to me with reply’s . this is my first story, i hope forgive me if i did any mistakes.
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saiprakash wrote: Fri Sep 02, 2022 11:58 am pls respond to me with reply’s . this is my first story, i hope forgive me if i did any mistakes.
The story itself isn't bad so far, but it is very obvious that English is not your first language. There are a ton of spelling and grammar errors as well as a bunch of sentences that don't really make correct sense in the way that they are written.

You might need to find a friend who is bilingual and better at English in order to properly translate your original story work into English better.
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