A babysitter, two girls and their annoying brother!

[Lola]

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[TeenFan]

This is a great start to what could end up being a multi-chapter story.
Getting someone to volunteer to be some of the characters would be interesting.

How old is the babysitter? Teenager or more like 20 years old?
How old is Eric and the two other girls?
This would help someone know how to write a continuation of the story.

[Robert Brooks]

I’m loving this story so far!

I wonder what sort of underwear he is wearing… briefs? boxers? boxer-briefs? (I hope briefs, that would definitely be the most embarrassing!)

[Lola]

This is a great start to what could end up being a multi-chapter story.
Getting someone to volunteer to be some of the characters would be interesting.

How old is the babysitter? Teenager or more like 20 years old?
How old is Eric and the two other girls?
This would help someone know how to write a continuation of the story.

Thank you! Maybe i'll be able to write another chapter next week!

[Lola]

I’m loving this story so far!

I wonder what sort of underwear he is wearing… briefs? boxers? boxer-briefs? (I hope briefs, that would definitely be the most embarrassing!)

Thsnk you! In my imagination he is wearing briefs... But non for long!!

[GeekGuy]

Fun story so far looking forward to the next part

[Thatsadperv33]

This is delicious. Please post more!

[Executionus]

This is a fantastic start to this!

My warning about collaborations is that usually you run into a problem where the partner just disappears one day and never updates again. You're best off doing it yourself probably.

[Lola]

This is a fantastic start to this!

My warning about collaborations is that usually you run into a problem where the partner just disappears one day and never updates again. You're best off doing it yourself probably.

Thank you for the advice! I hope i can write more soon

[Lola]

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