Poolside Shenanigans.

Stories about boys ending up in compromising situations, preferably naked and embarrassed, as the name suggests.
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Re: Poolside Shenanigans.

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Glad to see a new chapter of Pool Shenanigans. Loved that Klara got the surprise of her life at the door.
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A boy cuming while spying on girls from the safety of his room. Don't see that very often.
Charlie's secret is soon going to become common knowledge, and the Dares haven't even gotten started.
Sorry Charlie, but didn't your momma say "There'd be days like this" ("Mama Said" by The Shirelles)
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Fantastic chapter! The story gets better and better and every time you think Charlie has avoided the worst case scenario some new potential disaster pops up.

How on earth is he going to explain himself to his crush? She must be the last person he wants to see like this, there's surely no way she won't be telling everyone at her school what she's seen. And will Mother hear all the commotion downstairs and come to investigate?

Amazingly written, cannot wait for the next installment!
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Charlie was living in a real nightmare, a nightmare where he knew a pinch wouldn't solve anything, there was a gaping feeling in his loins. A full sensation, he couldn't feel fuller. The boy needed to go hide, grab his rod, pull the foreskin back and go to town on his boner spewing the load he had built up all week. How and when? He wouldn't get any time today and he certainly couldn't get caught doing such a thing.

If the boy's hands were preoccupied he might have started right then and there, he felt like he really had to, to drop one of the lemonades and go to town but he couldn't. He had to stand here, looking down like a fool at his lurching boner, a boner that seemed to have a life of its own.

For an eternity it seemed like no one had anything to say, there wasn't really anything to say so of course some of the ice needed to be broken and Steven was more than happy to interject.

"Jeez bro, can your thing get any harder?"

Klara, less in shock at what she was seeing, just stared down the cock in awe while Steven and Abigail snorted and chuckled, they couldn't believe how the day kept getting better and better.

"Seriously, what the hell? Your sister mentioned that your mother was a lot more insistent on you being in the buff but Jesus Christ she never mentioned… Never mentioned… That monster, sticking up at me!" Klara let herself in, closing the door behind and took a big step toward Charlie.

Charlie couldn't help but start to feel a sense of dread, right in front of him was the girl he had begun to develop quite the major crush for, for a year now, and she was now eyeing up his naked body. It was bad enough that his friends were seeing him naked, hard and vulnerable but her? He didn't know how he was going to face her, how he was supposed to explain? What was there to explain?

The group stood once again in silence, Charlie contemplating his next move, frozen in anxiety. Steven came to aid once again.

"Ok Charlie, let's get back to the pool. That way we can carry on with your dares!"

Klara's eyes lit up with curiosity and Abigail seemed to know exactly what was in the mind of the new girl, she seemed to have the need to clarify that,

"Oh you can give him one too, like… I had already given him one but he failed it, when he fails nothing happens but… We just get to give him another, he has four. (I have one.)" Abigail seemed to get quieter as she was explaining her number of dares. Everyone noticed, but most were preoccupied with the thought that they still had four dares to give this naked and clearly very aroused boy.

The group turned to the hallway overlooking the pool as they began to march to it. Abigail and Steven were in the front, Charlie and Klara were at the back. Klara was barely looking ahead, rather she was mesmerized by the upright and extreme projection of Charlie's engorged appendage which under the watchful eye of Charlie's crush gazing upon him in such a state had started to twitch in more of a sequence now. Twitching as if it had a life of its own.

The group were closing in on the door outside. Everyone was talking except Charlie who was still processing everything. His entire body felt funny, tingly, like it was on fire and like it was burning up. He wasn't I'll but he never felt such a feeling in his life before, he knew it had something to do with being naked in front of his friends, a pesky stiffy right in front of them but it wasn't just that. No, no! It couldn't just be that simple and Charlie could feel it in the pit of his stomach. It felt like his body was in the beginning stages of building to an ejaculation. That he would start to have another bout of splatting white liquid from his aggressive member again as he did for the first time last week. How embarrassing would that be?

The train of thought was instantly broken when the very same two friends up in front stopped and Charlie's big boner collided with Abigail's soft bikini clad behind. A small squeak was heard from the girl and as soon as Charlie wanted to pull away, he looked up and quickly denounced the idea. Mother was standing there in a white robe which barely covered the baby blue bikini that made it obvious she was preparing to perhaps take a dive in the pool. Charlie knew to stay with his boner pressed against Abigail. If he were to step anywhere else his hard on would be up for scrutiny with Mum and he couldn't do that, he wouldn't ever let her see.

He could feel Abigail squirming as she probably felt uncomfortable, but that was hardly the truth. She couldn't believe what was behind her, I mean she had a pretty good idea what it was, and she basically knew but she was trying to kid herself out of it, that it wasn't happening. It felt so hot, so twitchy and so alive. She wanted to touch it, to feel it with her grasp, to explore it. It was a foreign device, it was strange to think of it as something disconnected from the body of one of her best friends but it just looked that way. It didn't look like something that belonged to the body of her innocent friend, it looked carnal.

"Oh Klara, Good to see you. When your mother said she was coming over later I hoped you'd come, I know Suzy isn't here yet but she is coming later. While you are waiting you can take a dip in the pool with Charlie and his mates. I will be joining you guys but I just need to pop upstairs again and prepare something, looks like we are going to be having another guest show up!"

With that Charlie's mother quickly made her way back up the stairs. Just missing out once again on seeing the rampant rigid rod sticking out from her son. Charlie didn't know how much longer he could continue to avoid such a fate. If only he had time to try and shoot like he was finally able to last week. With a wank he should be able to get soft again and have this all blow over, quite comically. At least that's what he thought as he didn't know how long the recharge phase was.

The group eventually got outside again, Charlie's friends in laughter. Steven was having too much fun in Charlie's eyes. Prancing around him and silently cheering.

"She nearly saw it! She nearly saw it! Charlie's boner, she nearly saw it!"

Charlie was annoyed, but unexpectedly he wasn't paying attention, no no. He was preoccupied. The newly joining teenage goddess was undressing into her bikini right in front of his eyes. Delicately placing her clothes onto one of the sun loungers, an umbrella raised up to protect her clothing from sun damage but each movement seemed to only show off her stunning, curvy and developing body.

His unfazed stare was interrupted when Steven jolted him in the shoulder and quickly took up his vision. Almost like he was shielding Charlie from the gaze of the girls in front.

"Bro!" Steven whispered, pointing downward.
"You got a little situation down there!" He silently chuckled.

Upon looking downward Charlie saw what his friend wanted him to see. His boner was lurching, angry and looked to be strained as his veins popped out more from along the shaft and even the sides. It looked exactly how it did last week, minus the large throbbing secret hidden behind the slightly parted and ruffled pink folds of his foreskin. It really did look nearly identical to when he succumbed to his carnal urges a week earlier. But he didn't get such a good look at this clear liquid that seemed to drip out of him in a viscous line, unbreaking and swinging with each heartbeat throb sent out by his beast of an erection.

Was he cumming? He didn't think so, it felt really good, but not the euphoric release he had experienced last week… Was he about to cum? Now that felt more likely, was he about to cum now? In front of everyone? He didn't want to, but looking down, the thing seemed to have a mind of its own. If it happened, what could he even do to stop it?

Perhaps Charlie should have attempted to wipe some of this unnamed liquid off as now the girls got curious, was there something up with Charlie's body? Why did it look like Steven was shielding his friend? When both girls approached, all was made clear and they gasped in shock.

It didn't help Charlie in the slightest that the second he saw Klara in her Bikini, noticing how her breasts were pushing out and perky, starting to throb and ooze a good dolloping of precum. The old line snapped off and splattered on the tiles as the new line took its place. All Klara could think about is how horny the 'little' boy in her sight was, how much cum was stored in his balls. Must be tons in there to draw out this type of reaction. A reaction to her breasts?

The poor boy was barely focusing on anything else, this is what was garnering that throbbing thing between his legs and it seemed like his friend, the other boy, also noticed why it was happening. The only one who didn't know was Abigail who bent over to more closely inspect the dripping totem.

"Yikes, did Charlie just release his sperm?" She asked while nearly out stretching a finger to prod at the viscous line emanating, dabbing it and then quickly pulling away. Looking as the line stretched as her finger pulled away. It was as if it was trying to rope the hand closer to the shaft.
"Ewww, why is it doing that?!"

This seemed to snap Charlie out of his erotic day dream, a dream of breasts, as he looked down and saw a horror filled sight. Everyone saw his massive boner leaking, why now of all days?

"It's because he is looking at her boobs!" Steven chuckled as he ousted his friend.

Charlie turned to his face with a shocked face but he couldn't deny it. He tried but no words of reasoning came out.

"Yeah but he saw my boobs and this didn't happen before!" Abigail commented. Somehow she was completely oblivious as she saw a smile form on the faces of Klara and Steven and then the realization hit, Charlie had the hots for his sister's older friend.

"That's because yours have yet to become 'womanly'" Klara exclaimed As she jutted out her chest and put her arms together in a fashion to show off her boobs that much more. Asking for a reaction, and a reaction she got.

The poor boy's balls must've been working overtime as a sequence of pulses and another bigger emission of precum dripped out. The boy was captivated and Abigail didn't like that one bit. This random girl seemed to get her friend to look on basically drooling, not from his mouth, and when her nice and perky breasts came out early in their nicely tied bikini she got no reaction. It wasn't fair.

Klara had a desire for the day, she needed to see this young boy pop, to expel the obvious large build up in his testes but it couldn't be her. She wanted to see the boy pop off randomly, spontaneously even. So turned on that it just shoots out, making a spectacle of himself but it would have to wait. She needed to learn more about what was happening before.

Steven was more than happy to fill in the loose ends, regardless of how embarrassing it may have been for his friend to have to stand there and hear it all. It was clear that Charlie had a crush on Klara and the now jealous Abigail wanted Charlie to react the same way to her. To have his big appendage move for her, not Klara.

Against everything that Abigail knew about herself up until this day, Abigail stuck out her developing chest more, clad only in her more modest bikini top. Well, it was more modest than what Klara had on her chest, and it did in fact have the result Abigail wanted.
Charlie’s eyes bulged out a little and his cock definitely lurched one more time, but it lacked the intensity it showed for Klara. Though the pulsing pole was definitely getting more and more rowdy. The poor boy needed a way out of the situation, but that was looking to be a long while away as Klara grabbed the boy by the arm and dragged him to the sunbeds.

Charlie assumed this was in order to allow him to finally put the glasses of ice cold lemonade down, but little did he know of Klara’s real motive. She was rummaging through her bag looking for something that would prove to be rather the embarrassment for dear Charlie.

While Charlie turned around to look at his friends a quick snap was heard from the direction of Klara, she had just taken a selfie with the boy’s erection in frame. Charlie jumped in an attempt to get himself out of frame as he let out a very hurt “WHAT THE HELL!” He tried to position his hands in a manner that covered him somewhat, but with his oversized appendage, there was no way he was going to be able to cover any of it.

“Oh sorry, your dick just looked really impressive in that stance so I thought of just taking a quick pic!” Klara said so nonchalantly as she flashed her phone at the group.

What it showed was Klara doing a pouting face but in the background from the nipples down, a naked boy with an erection that strained up and slightly past his own belly button. The veiny drooling boner was quite the shock in an otherwise typical teen photo pose. Steven and Abigail found it funny but all Charlie could do was beg her to delete it.

“Delete it? Noooo… I think I may post this pic on insta…” Charlie's heart sank before Klara added on
“I'm just kidding, I may show a friend or two though!”

This was still awful for Charlie to hear but his friends were just sniggering, laughing at the situations that Charlie was getting into in the span of just a couple of hours. The sun would still be up for a while and both Steven and Abigail knew things were going to still be progressing. Hell, they still have a dare game to play.

“Oh, Charlie I bet that type of picture would look amazing on your wall here at home, you could be a Dickasso. Imagine if that would be how your mother saw you with a stiffy!” Steven grinned.

Charlie didn't even want to imagine that, how she would react, how embarrassed Charlie would be and if Mother would even proudly display such a picture.

Mother only had one picture of Charlie in the nude, resting upon her makeup table. It was taken the prior year, right before they moved to America, right as Charlie's ‘penis standing up’ issues began.

It was at Grandma's, and a bunch of Charlie's cousins were there. They had a mini inflatable pool and all the kids were allowed to go into it. Charlie was made to get into it. Mother made a whole hooha about Charlie going in the nude even though the 12 year old boy was adamant about keeping some sort of shorts on. Not taking no for an answer, mother stripped the poor boy in front of his cousins, aunties and uncles, grandma, herself and his older sister Suzy.

Most had grown accustomed to the whole charade but Charlie figured this time it would be different as he was now 12, he was so nearly there at the teenage marker. His cousins were about the same age and their parents didn't do this! But Charlie's mother, with her own idea of what is right and wrong still stripped the boy, exposing his dick and balls to everyone. Cousin Louise took a lot of pleasure at being able to see a boy her age with his willy out and would constantly poke fun at Charlie while he was getting a sunscreen rub down from Mum. But of course it was the trademarked Mr. Winky head tickles that Charlie hated most of all.

After some time in the pool Charlie started to feel a bit of a tingle in his nether region. He assumed he needed to pee so after a quick dry he marched right inside, completely skipping past his mother who thought he was going inside to hide his nudity. Charlie rushes by and says he needs to pee. Mother still embarrasses Charlie by shouting it's better he rush into the house rather than do it in the pool like he once did when he was three years old.

Going up the stairs Charlie looked down at his crotch and saw something alarming. His willy was slightly swelled. It didn't exactly hang low and small anymore, it sort of propped itself up, and the tingling was growing. Each step up he saw that it was filling up, getting longer, getting fatter and by the time he made it up the stairs it stuck straight up, pointing right up at the ceiling. One quick poke showed him how rigid it was. It looked obscene, what on earth was happening to it? It felt embarrassing, that he needed to hide it, that his swollen willy couldn't be seen by anyone. Charlie now knew he didn't need to pee. It looked too big and that scared the young boy somewhat. Was it the water? The cream? The way mother kept tickling Mr Winky’s pink head when Charlie didn't want her too? Was it Cousin Lucy and her constant tugging on which she promised she didn't do on purpose and even though Charlie complained to mum about it nothing seemed to come of it. Charlie swore he'd never let her do that again, especially if she was the one who made his willy like this.

Charlie tried many things in order to get it back to normal. First he tried to push it down, and that only ended up hurting a little and it was hard to do. The willy was too hard to go down and resulted in sending it up with a spring, slapping his abdomen and then pointing sky high again. One thing Charlie did note was that if felt good to hold, but a certain type of good he didn't quite understand at that age. He even weirdly put a ruler to it and measuring 15cm(6 inches)

With this hard willy not going down Charlie was stuck. It didn't help that Charlie knew his mother was going to start to yell at him to go down and that she did. It started with his mother shouting his name, and for him to go outside as it was picture time. No way was Charlie going to go down with his winky pointing up for pictures. That was too embarrassing. He didn't want them to see it like this. So he tried stalling but mother was getting impatient. He knew it was only a matter of time before mother were to come upstairs and see him with this stiff willy but he reasoned it was better than going downstairs and outside having it on display for most of his family. Perhaps mother would not make him go back outside and actually solve the issue with the swelling. He could only hope so, and not wanting to go down and let mother slowly make her way up calling his name.
Each thump lowered Charlie's resolve more and more until he couldn't take it anymore. Though he needed his solution to the problem, he couldn't let his mother see it so with one last look at this upright cock, he covered it with the nearest thing, a pillow. The very same second Mother burst through the door and with a disappointed face looked upon her son covering himself.

He really had come in here to cover up, and not only that, he is covering up in front of her again. He knew how much she hated that. What on earth did her young boy have that needed to bother him to hide it from her? She just didn't get it, she didn't get how her nice innocent boy would ever feel embarrassed about his bits and bobs.

“Move the pillow Charlie!” Mother bellowed but Charlie didn't budge.

He couldn't, he tried to reason with her that there was something wrong with his willy and that she couldn't see it. Completely oblivious to any reasoning, mother tried to pry the pillow away, demanding that if there was something wrong that she should see it and sort it out like a mother should, but Charlie didn't let go.

Mother started to speak in a more concerned manner and before Charlie knew it he lost the war of attrition. He closed his eyes as surely mother must already have seen the embarrassing stiff willy.

“What on earth were you talking about, see it's completely normal!” Mother said even grabbing and twiddling around the floppy willy.

Charlie looked down and it was like a miracle, the stiff threatening appendage had gone all floppy. With a ruffling of his hair, mother led the calmer boy down the stairs, completely missing the dots on whatever the boy was complaining about with his willy.

The picture was done and taken and now it rested in his mother's bedroom. Thinking back, Charlie thought that if mother had actually seen his boner she'd have made him go down anyway and would have had him take a picture. Regardless of the hardness she probably would've displayed it on the wall with big bold letters spelling out “Son's Big First Boner!” but luckily that didn't happen and never will.

Snapping out of his daydream Charlie was looking at Karla studying the picture she had just taken, when she mentions that.

“You do have a really nice looking dick even with the pink skin at the top. I'm going to assume Steven doesn't have that considering you are home grown American. Have you seen any dicks Abigail?”

Charlie expected the answer to be no. Abigail seemed innocent and never mentioned any kind of story with dicks to Charlie, but to all but Steven's surprise Abigail actually had, and it was rather recent too.

She told the group about an older boy called Erickson whose dick fell out of his underwear when they went swimming in Steven's apartment pool, about how the big dick got hard in front of both kids eyes and how it was so funny how he didn't realize it had popped out, causing him to get very anxious and eventually he rushed home much to the amusement of the two.

Steven even chuckled at the story confirming its validity. Charlie remembers that day. He was invited but didn't or couldn't go. He didn't have any swimsuits and he knew if his mother found out he didn't go in the buff he would've been in for it. So he bailed, but he always noticed how Abigail and Steven never mentioned what happened that day, or even told a funny story. Now he knows they saw something but all he could do was give out a little frown at the fact his friends had kept something from him.

Klara clapped her hands at the story while Charlie stood still in a sort of shock. His friends had seen what he could only describe as a “Water Weenie War”. Steven even mentioned how the penis in question was very upright and Abigail even touched it a bit, if only to relieve the boy of his embarrassing erection from being on display. All this new info was having a very visible effect on their poor young friend Charlie, whose erection seemed once again to have leveled up in some capacity, it looked downright remarkable.

The trance that seemed to envelope everyone suddenly disappeared as they all heard the gated backyard gate swing open as a voice way too familiar to Charlie called out.

“Oh so you are already here Klara?!” Suzy then took notice of the two she didn't recognise.
“Huh? So my dear brother did finally bring home some friends. I thought that the fact he has to swim in the buff would have scared him from doing so forever but perhaps he has lightened up somewhat…”

After a response full of silence Suzy got concerned. Her brother, who was clearly naked from behind, seemed to be breathing heavily and seemed to freeze, scared stiff of something. Suzy had seen her little brother naked countless times, she probably had his willys appearance permanently engraved in her brain but this time Charlie seemed a bit more on edge than usual.

Suzy edged closer to the group as she started to joke about how it is so unfortunate that Charlie is still made to be nude regardless of how much he may or may not have grown. She even asked the two other kids who appeared equally shocked, it was probably the excess skin on the appendage that was getting them all flustered, well she was going to make Charlie show them that everything is ok.

Charlie stood in shock, looking down, there was no way to hide this massive erection. Nowhere to go, nowhere to hide. He didn't want to show off anything, Suzy can't see this, she would tease him until his ears fell off. With that in mind Charlie opted to run, he'd rather her briefly see it than have ample time to study it like Klara and his friends have been.

As quickly as the attempt started, it ended. Charlie now knew the reason lifeguards at pools don't allow you to run at pools. Tripping up and landing on his ass gave Suzy and everyone else there an amazing almost majestic view of an erect weiner flying about in the air before Charlie landed right on his ass. His balls basically landed on his sisters barefoot. Her eyes opened wide as she looked down at what she could only describe as the biggest cock she had seen in all 17 years of her life. She knew Charlie was big, but never seeing him erected she could never concretely say. Whether he was a grower or a shower, how thick the whole thing became.

She had never seen him with a boner, but knew subconsciously that if Mother kept up her antics it was more than likely going to happen at some point, though she probably didn't guess quite this late. Perhaps Charlie had been actively hiding this whenever he got it. Now that was likely judging from his reaction.

Charlie went bright red as he almost looked on the verge of bawling his eyes out. His erection pulsated right next to the leg of his older sister. He knew she could see him in all his glory and with the confused smirk on her face, he knew this was prime teasing material for her, and she didn't disappoint his expectations. Of course he'd rather have had her shut up, but that was never going to happen.

“Oh my! Oh my, it seems like my younger brother has hit quite the growth spurt down there in the Mr Winky department, it was only last week that I saw him and look how much he has grown. Boys really do have growth spurts at the most random times, no hair though, not that I can see anyway.” She exclaimed, nudging her leg into the throbbing pole, really adding to the fire she was making. She loved that the authority was showing off.

Steven, Klara And Abigail almost moved in unison to come around to see what on earth was happening to Charlie, adding to the embarrassment of having so many eyes on the turgid boy meat. Suzy of course had to go further.

“Jeez, there is something you have growing that isn't at all common don't you… Perhaps I should show your friends?” Suzy explained as her foot raised and her big toe and index toe separated as she brought it up to the tip of the shaft, right on Charlie's foreskin. Charlie looked on in shock, she wouldn't.

“No please Suzy! No, please don't do it! Don't show them Mr Winky’s head right now, wait till it gets softer please!” Of course Charlie's pleas weren't met with any empathy from Suzy who started to make attempts to pull which sent Charlie into an overdrive of fear and even a couple of tears.
“NOOO!” He screamed out.

It was pathetic really, Suzy thought. She had seen it countless times and the confusion on Steven and Abigail's faces told her that they had at least seen it and were somewhat surprised. Sure it may be a little bit bulbous, but nothing out of proportion and with that in mind the skin's downward movement carried on.

It was tough, too tough, Suzy almost stopped thinking she would hurt her younger brother but nothing of the sort was even blurted out. Just wails not to uncover the mysterious knobhead.

The pink folds were being strained around the obviously purplish bulged head as Charlie started to feel immense pleasure and pressure. Suzy needed to stop now before it was too late. The straining should've made her stop, Charlie was wondering what she wasn't stopping.

“Oh jeez, perhaps we should talk to Mum about getting you the snip, it's clear the skin is too tight. Oh well, at least you'll look better off without it. American boys and their heads are always on the show just like I will be showing yours off in just a second.”

Suzy with renewed vigor started to get right to the ridges now. The tightest part was up, just this little bit left and all of Charlie would be on display. Suzy was a bit confused though, the head. It looked a bit too big…

“Jeez, how big is your dick head Charlie!” Steven called out, adding his own flames as Suzy mounted for the final pull.

Charlie knew she could back out now and all would be ok, he even shouted so but it was too late. Suzy was now committed to the action and Charlie knew she was committed to showing off his more valued secret.

Though Charlie tried to wriggle his way out, the foot of his sister won and in an almost climax-inducing pull, the engorged purpled freakish and grotesque head popped its way out. Charlie could only look on in disbelief, hoping it was all a bad dream as everyone looked at the thing.

It was too big for the pole, it was mushroomy, its rim bulged over the diameter for the shaft and the shaft was already so thick. To Klara and Suzy though it was oddly erotic in its visuals. To them it was clear what Charlie's body was perfectly constructed to do but to Abigail and Steven it just looked rather odd and funny looking. Charlie was overreacting in this regard.

The delicious pleasure on his knobhead had his boner secreting another dosage of precum right on Suzy’s toes. Much to Charlie's and Suzy’s shock. But the bigger shock was a calling voice from the doorway.

“Suzy, is that you? Are you home dear?” Mrs Blanc called out…
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That was a big chapter about the revealing of a big boner to too many people. Poor Charlie, all his bodily secrets exposed. How could it get
any worse? Oops, forgot about Mamma. She might not see "her son's first big boner" but she might see something even more embarrassing...
a big leaky boner dribbling on the carpet.
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Great chapter, Marble. Charlie's boner is the star of the show!
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Been eagerly anticipating the return of this story and you didn't disappoint. Just amazing stuff !

Loved how often we got to hear about how Charlie was feeling, every second of him being naked and erect in front of his friends and Klara must feel like hours. You really nailed the paranoia and panic the poor boy is suffering from, the cocktail of extreme emotions he's having. Shame and humiliation but also arousal and horniness. Plus the dread of his Mother seeing him stiff.

Steven winding Charlie up and getting him into more trouble is very funny and feels like something a male friend would do to his buddy in this situation. Abigail jealous of the effect Kalra has on him is very interesting. Perhaps a romance in the future potentially? We shall see

Always a big fan of flashback scenes when done well and this was done perfectly. I hope we somehow get to hear more from Grandma and cousin Lucy, they seem like fun characters to get Charlie into more embarrassing naked situations.

Suzy has never seen him erect before either! I don't know why I assumed she had, but of course it makes sense she hadn't if Mother hadn't either. Mr Winky :lol: Suzy revealing the head of his penis against his wishes seems a little cruel but I'm sure she only did it for his benefit. Anyway what's done is done, now way back now for Charlie.

And what a cliffhanger to end on. Just masterful stuff, the only thing I didn't like was knowing it was coming to an end and there will be another long wait for the next update. Just fantastic stuff!
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