Beckster89 wrote: ↑Mon Apr 08, 2024 8:33 am
Hi! I have started my first ever ENM story over at CHYOA and thought I would post it here for feedback and suggestions as to what could happen next.
I am very open to suggestions as to where the story can go and due to the nature of CHYOA it can branch off at any point so please do let me know if you have any ideas or requests to be included in the story!
This is a fun story. The only suggestion I can make is there are some mispellings that make it unclear sometimes what word was intended.
You can make an edit on a chapter after posting (in case you didn't already know), a wonderful feature here
that other sites don't have.
I'm curious what might happen if James runs into a deaf person, and he can't tell her the magic words. Dang it where is a pen when you need
one and a sheet of paper..oh shit, there she goes and he can't call her back....
Beckster89 wrote: ↑Mon Apr 08, 2024 8:33 am
Hi! I have started my first ever ENM story over at CHYOA and thought I would post it here for feedback and suggestions as to what could happen next.
I am very open to suggestions as to where the story can go and due to the nature of CHYOA it can branch off at any point so please do let me know if you have any ideas or requests to be included in the story!
This is a fun story. The only suggestion I can make is there are some mispellings that make it unclear sometimes what word was intended.
You can make an edit on a chapter after posting (in case you didn't already know), a wonderful feature here
that other sites don't have.
I'm curious what might happen if James runs into a deaf person, and he can't tell her the magic words. Dang it where is a pen when you need
one and a sheet of paper..oh shit, there she goes and he can't call her back....
Thank you for the feedback! Yes, definitely needs a proofread and luckily that can be done on CHYOA as you say!
I like the idea of James getting into an embarrassing situation with a deaf person and will try and include that later down the line.
"I'm sorry, I um.." James began to stammer but the taller woman put out her hand to stop him.
"Don't be, I think it's wonderful to see someone so sexually liberated as to walk into a book store naked and look at picture's of other naked bodies. It's only natural" the woman smiled "Although, I have to admit, I would never do it"
"Oh, well, I wouldn't either usually" James answered, finding the conversation quite pleasant under the awkward circumstances "I doubt I'm as liberated as you think"
"But you like erotic photography?" the woman smiled back.
"Um, well, I was just browsing really"
"My friend and I are actually studying photography and both branching out into erotica" the second woman explained.
"Oh right, well that's interesting I guess" James nodded back politely, aware that he was still fully erect and talking to two attractive women about erotic photography was only keeping him hard.
"In fact, I got some amazing shots of you" the second woman smiled as if it was the most natural thing in the world to drop into the conversation.
"What?" James answered back in astonishment.
"A cute, shy, naked guy in a bookstore, it was too good an opportunity to miss!" the woman smiled "Here, look how good they turned out!"
To his horror the woman showed James the screen of a digital camera he had not noticed her holding and ran through a series of photos. There was one of him from behind as he crouched naked looking for the Idiot's Guide to Sex book. Part of his penis could be seen dangling between his legs and his head was turned enough for him to be recognisable. A second photo showed him from the side looking at the book of erotic pictures with an erection and the third showed him chatting happily to the first girl while also fully erect.
James was horrified but the student seemed completely oblivious to that.
"See? Don't they look good? The contrast between your nudity and arousal and the serene and conservative setting of a book shop is so perfect. I'll need to use some filters on them but they will be perfect for my portfolio and the exhibition on erotic photography that I'm hoping to put on soon."
"But you can't do that! It's an invasion of my privacy!" James protested "And you don't have my permission!"
"Dude, you are walking around here butt naked!" the woman laughed dismissively "I'm free to photograph anything I want in public and I don't need your permission. I'm using the photos!"
James was about to argue further when he realised it was almost time for his doctors appointment. Angry and embarrassed, he picked up the Idiots Guide to Sex and walked away. To his horror the women followed and he could hear them talking still.
"Oh my God! Did you see what he is buying? I'm going to get a picture of him paying for it!"
James grudgingly walked to the counter and paid for his book, fully aware that he was being photographed as he did so. He tried to reassure himself that the girl who was attempting to make a star of him was just some small time local amateur photographer and this was nothing to worry about but he couldn't shake a strange, nagging feeling this was going to come back to haunt him later..
James took the short walk from the book store to the doctors surgery where he immediately felt the greatest resistance yet to his nudity.
"I'm sorry sir, you can't come in here like that, it's not hygienic!" the officious looking receptionist told him.
"It's normal for me to be naked" James replied to her tetchily, the frustrations of the day now really testing his patience. It was only the second time he had used his safety word which seemed reasonable to James. He hoped he could talk his way out of using it again with the doctor and it seemed pretty redundant at the sex shop so hopefully this would be the last time it was needed and Holly would avoid any potential punishment.
"I'm sorry sir, of course it is" the receptionist looked a little embarrassed at her error on having questioned him "How can I help you sir?"
"I have an appointment with Dr Khatri at 12:30" James told her.
"Thank you Mr MacDougall, I'll confirm you have arrived" the receptionist smiled cordially "If you will just step through to the waiting room the doctor will see you when she is available. I'm afraid she is running a little late today, there may be a wait of up to 30 minutes, However, I would ask you to remain in the waiting room in case she is ready earlier.
James nodded as politely as he could at this unwelcome news and stepped through to the waiting room which was about as standard as could be expected. There were a dozen chairs arranged in a circle around the room with a small desk with a pile of magazines in one corner and some Lego in the other.
Due to the long wait the room was packed and the glances of silent disapproval James received from nearly everyone there were the worst he had experienced yet. This was going to be a very long half an hour. The room was mostly full of older looking people, there was also an attractive young mother who sat and watched her daughter playing obliviously with the Lego. The only spare seat in the room was next to the young parent so James took it, politely placing his hands over his cock and balls as he did to minimize offence. The mood of the whole room seemed to be to say nothing to or about James while disapproving of his nudity as visibly as possible. James wasn't sure how long that silence would remain. James found the type of cheap leather used didn't react well to his naked skin. It stuck a little to his buttocks and balls which were sweating from the stress of the situation. Whenever he shifted his position to get more comfortable he caused a comical squeaking sound to emit from the chair and every time that happened it felt like the whole room glared at him anew. This was going to be a long half hour.
James sat patiently in the waiting room, looking up at the clock every few seconds and willing it to move forward. It almost felt like it was stuck in place! James had never been so aware of his nakedness in his life.
After a time a strikingly beautiful and smartly dressed South Asian woman in her early thirties walked to the entrance of the waiting room.
"Mrs Barker?"
Dr Khatri scanned the waiting room for her next patient, an elderly woman who was taking some time to get to her feet. As the doctors eyes landed on James she seemed initially shocked then glared at him with intense disapproval.
"Excuse me sir, you can't come into the surgery like that!"
James was about to open his mouth and hop some kind of plausible excuse came out of it but the receptionist called out from her desk to the doctor and answered for him.
"It's okay Dr Khatri, Mr MacDougall is allowed to be naked here"
Dr Khatri gave the receptionist a confused look but decided not to argue and returned to her office with Mr Barker in tow. James was pretty sure he was going to get a frosty reception from the doctor when he headed there in twenty minutes or so.
To his annoyance James could hear his phone buzzing. He was sitting with both hands over his cock and balls wasn't well disposed to answer it. He tried to ignore it but it continued buzzing and, not wanting to antagonise the room any further he decided he really needed to answer it. James kept his genitalia covered as best he could while his right reached for his phone. It was Rebecca - he knew he had to answer it.
"Hello? What is it?" James asked with more than a hint of irritation.
"Okay, act like this is a normal conversation" Rebecca instructed him cheerily.
"I'll do my best" James smiled through gritted teeth.
"This day has been a lot of fun but watching you just sitting in a waiting room is kind of dull so I've decided to liven things up!"
"Okay, and how are you going to do that?" James dreaded to ask.
"I'm going to tell you to do stuff and you are going to do it for me!" Rebecca told him in an infuriatingly smug tone.
"Am I?"
"Sure you are, since you like Holly and I have been thinking of some super mean spells to put on her whenever you disobey me"
"Okay, so what would you like me to do?"
"Well, first of all, I would like to see you put your left hand on your thigh and leave it there until the doctor calls you or I say otherwise. And you will need to say on the phone to me with your other hand, obviously."
Wordlessly, James moved the one hand that was concealing his manhood and placed it on his leg. He was fully exposed now and could feel all eyes on him. The fact that nobody was saying anything almost made the situation worse. James could feel his cheeks burning in the stunned silence.
"Okay good, now I want you to get hard!"
"What?" James asked in disbelief.
"You heard me, I want you sitting there in the waiting room with a great big erection for my amusement."
"It's not that easy. How am I supposed to do that here and now? Under these circumstances?"
"You'll have to think of something that makes you horny I guess" came the nonchalant "But do it quickly, okay? You don't want me getting bored!"
"I can't really think of anything right now, I'm serious Rebecca!" James had been pushed way past his boundaries already and didn't see any way he could make himself aroused in a situation where he was this nervous.
"Fine, I'll help you, just shut up and listen. But don't say I never do anything nice for you, okay?" Rebecca paused for a moment. When she started speaking "You are a hot naked guy in a room full of women. Okay, maybe most of them are a little old for you but what about that hot little office worker type sitting next to you? You do know she has peeked at your dick three times already and it hasn't been out for long. I'm watching all of this remember."
"You've forced her to think about your big dick and now it's all she can think of. She's probably had a long day already, she's bored, she's sat here for twenty minutes already and then you go and stick your dick right next to her. What do you think she is thinking about now? She is fantasising about you sticking it inside her. And not later, right now, in the waiting room in front of everyone."
He almost wished he wasn't, but James could feel that this was working already. He still hated being naked in public of course, but in this one instance it couldn't hurt to indulge this fantasy to get through Rebecca's latest challenge.
"I promise you, if there was nobody else here right now she would take off her glasses, let down her hair, get on her knees and wrap her lips around your cock. Maybe I should put a spell on her to make her lose her inhibitions to prove my point. Would you like that James? Because I can do it with the wave of my finger!"
James was practically erect by now and, to make matters worse the woman next to him was checking out his rising cock so unsubtly that he didn't need Rebecca to point it out this time. The witch was right, he was one spell away from being sucked off by the hot businesswoman.
"Or what about that doctor? You like her too don't you? Maybe I could put a spell on her to make her do whatever you say. How would you like that? You could make her do whatever you want? Shall I do it? Shall I ...Oh wait, look up"
James now with a rock hard cock it would have been impossible to miss if he were fully clothed looked up to see Dr Khatri standing opposite him scowling and a little embarrassed with her hands on her hips.
"You know what, I think I'd better see you next and get you out of here!" she huffed before marching back to her office. James followed, willing his still fully erect penis down.
"Haha! Good luck convincing her to prescribe you Viagra now!" Rebecca laughed just before James hung up the phone.
James walked awkwardly and slowly towards the doctor's office, his erection not having fully subsided yet. When he entered Dr Khatri's room he felt her manner had changed a little. She seemed less outraged by his entering her surgery naked then sitting in her waiting room with a raging hard on. He couldn't hep but wonder if Rebecca had used her magic to effect Dr Khartri in some way.
"Take a seat please!" the doctor smiled.
James felt completely exposed now, even for somebody who had spent the past hour or so naked in public. The doctor was not only a naturally beautiful woman but somewhat of an imposing authority figure and here he was sat in front of her fully naked and ready to be examined.
"So what seems to be the problem?" the doctor smiled cordially.
"Um, erectile dysfunction" James blushed and silently cursed Rebecca for putting him up to this "If you could just prescribe me some Viagra I'll be on my way!"
"Well, it's really not that simple" Dr Khatri responded "I certainly couldn't in good faith prescribe any of my patients medication they don't require and, from what I just witnessed in the waiting room, your penis seems to be functioning perfectly well"
"Ah, but it doesn't always respond when I want it to" James lied.
"You mean in response to to sexual stimuli?" Dr Khatri asked.
"Yes, that's right" this was so embarrassing for James "So if you would prescribe me the Viagra I can take it when I need to"
"I would have to perform some medical tests first" the doctor paused for a moment "Please tell me honestly, and don't feel any need to spare my feelings, do you find me sexually attractive"
"Um.." James was completely thrown by the question "Well, yes I do. Very much so, in fact"
"That's good, it means I can test you here" Dr Khatri nodded as she typed something on her computer "In a moment I am going to strip for you"
"Excuse me? What?" James spluttered. He knew now Rebecca had put one of her less than innocent spells on the doctor.
"I'm going to slowly strip for you, maybe talk a bit dirty, feel myself up a little" Dr Khatri was talking as matter of factly as if this were a regular medical procedure "If you remain flacid throughout the process then I will happily prescribe you the medication you have requested."
"And if I don't?" James asked nervously, feeling this was a test he had no chance of passing.
"Then I will have to explore the issue further by giving you a thorough full body examination"
Dr Khatri, who had been sitting a few feet across from James stood up and placed one foot on her chair as she removed her shoe. She then stopped, smiled at James and very slowly switched legs and did the same with the other.
James wasn't sure what to do here. It was obvious the Doctor was enchanted and it was morally wrong to sit here and watch this but at the same time he was putting Holly in jeopardy. Besides, he had suffered so much himself at Rebecca's hands that it was about time he got some enjoyment out of her magic.
The Doctor was letting down her hair now, having removed her glasses. She may as well have been a model at this point. She was a naturally beautiful woman with long, black hair and a slim, toned body which she obviously took great care of.
"So tell me James, why did you come here naked? Was it to get my attention?" the doctor spoke seductively.
"No, I actually can't help it, believe it or not" James tried to explain as the doctor unbuttoned her blouse and let it hang open, revealing her brown perky tits hidden only know by a black cotton bra.
"A disease is it?" Dr Khatri teased "Well it looks like I'm catching it, doesn't it?"
James was unable to answer now, so desperately was he trying to keep himself from getting a full on erection again. She had removed her skirt now and casually threw off her open blouse so she was down to just her black bra and matching panties.
"Okay James, I'm going to turn around now, and when I turn back my professional medical opinion is that you will be rock hard!"
James was halfway there already and, try as he might to think unsexy thoughts, the stripping doctor was completely overpowering them. With her back to James Dr Khatri unhooked and removed her bra before dropping it to the floor. She then slowly wiggled her way out of her panties, gradually revealing her perfect peach like little bum to James before also letting those fall to the floor and kicking them away.
"Okay, I'm going to turn around now James at the count of three. Let's see if you really do have erectile dysfunction 3...2...1!"
The doctor turned around and smiled triumphantly at James who had an even more impressive hard on than the one Rebecca had given him a little earlier. She walked towards him and squatted her beautiful, fully naked self down right in front of him so her pretty face was just inches from his dick.
"Yep, that looks like an erection to me" she teased before playfully wrapping her hand around it "Feels like one too. Looks like it's time for you to have a full body examination!"
With James having completely failed her test, Dr Khatri quickly redressed and snapped back into her usual persona of a professional, respectable physician. But it soon became clear that Rebecca's magic was still at play here.
"I don't understand. What do you need to examine me for?" James asked, perplexed.
"It's not so much for medical reasons but a little side project of mine" Dr Khatri began to explain as she checked her hair in the mirror having tied it back into place "If you want me to prescribe you your Viagra, which you clearly don't need but desperately want, then you will help me with it."
"What kind of side project?" James asked, knowing full well this was going to be bad.
"Right now I only practice medicine but deep down I have always wanted to teach it too" Dr Khatri answered "And I don't know where from but I just had a wonderful moment of inspiration. Why don't I teach people about the naked male body using you as my subject?"
James cursed Rebecca for that unexpected moment of inspiration the doctor happened to have "teaching who? And is that even something people need to learn about?"
"Well, I guess we'll have to find out" Dr Khatri continued, immune to reason thanks to Rebecca's latest spell "And I don't have any students yet, though I would love to use you as my demonstration model some time. Though I'm not in a to position yet sadly."
James was relieved about that at least.
"But for now, how about we create some materials for a website"
"What kind of materials?"
"Well, I'd take lots of photos of you naked of course, some full body and others would be very close up and intimate. And it might also be good to have a video of me examining you all over. I could put that on Youtube to advertise the website. Also, if I do manage to get some classes going I could project the photos and video on a giant screen at the front of the room. What do you think?"
"You can't be serious?"
"You're walking around naked anyway, why do you care who sees you?" Dr Khatri asked and it was a difficult point to answer again.
"The answer is no"
"Well, it's the only way you are going to get your Viagra and I am not negotiating."
James had come so far, he knew he could allow himself to fail now and all of the days humiliation be for nothing. He would just have to hope this stupid website and class never got off the ground.
"First of all I want a full body shot of you, for the opening slide" Dr Khatri explained "Please just stand up and stand still, with a neutral facial expression"
James did as he was told "Do you really need to have my face in this? What if someone recognises me?"
"Then they will know you are keen to help a doctor with her medical teachings. I'm sure they would approve"
James stood still as the doctor took several full frontal naked photos of him which were hows now to do whatever she wished with.
"Good, now turn around please"
The doctor took more photos of James from behind.
"Right, now can you get up on the table and spread your legs wide"
Figuring there was no point in trying to back out now, James again indulged the doctor. She took a full body shot of James before walking much closer to him.
"This is all good stuff so far. For the next few slides, I would like to get some close up shots of your penis and scrotum"
"What?"
"Some close up shots so everyone can see your genitalia in great detail. Imagine that James! Your penis and scrotum projected onto a huge screen for a whole audience to inspect!"
"What kind of class is this?" James asked with incredulity, though he knew the question was pointless since Rebecca's magic was so obviously behind this strange behaviour.
"It's mostly about the male reproductive organs and how they function. Legs up please!" the doctor answered casually as she continued to take close up photos of James's most intimate area from various angles "That's why next I would like to commentate on a short film of you slowly masturbating to the point of ejaculation."
James sat on the examination table while Dr Khatri set up a tripod and fixed her digital camera onto it, fiddling with the viewer for some time to make sure it gave the clearest presentation of James's entire naked body. When she was satisfied she had the best shot possible she stood back a moment to address the star of her movie.
"Okay, I don't want you to address me or to say anything until we are done filming. And don't try and perform for the camera or try and get this over with, I just want you to do what comes naturally. Once we are done with this, I will prescribe you your Viagra and you can go"
James nodded that he understood. This was going to be awful but at least there was an end in sight to his ordeal at the doctors surgery. He just had to hope what was about to be recorded never found its way online. Dr Khatri raised her hand to indicate filming had begun. She then began commentating.
"This is James. By now you should all be intimately familiar with James and his body as you have been studying it in close detail. But now, it is time not just to see how it looks but how it functions."
James shifted a little uncomfortably at this thought as the doctor continued to talk about him as if he were an animal in a nature documentary.
"Like all humans, James is at heart a sexual creature. Although in his everyday life he would wear clothes to hide his body and reproductive organs, and keep the many sexual thoughts any typical male will have during any given day hidden too, here we are going to see his natural reaction to intense sexual arousal when not with a sexual partner. I will expose James to sufficient sexual stimuli to send him into an intense state of sexual arousal by undressing myself off camera. This will naturally cause a physiological response in James as his body prepares itself to initiate sexual intercourse with me. However, since he will not be permitted to do this, he will need to use an alternate method to relieve his animal urge to mate. In this video I will be guiding you through the process of sexual arousal in a male, male masturbation and ejaculation."
James managed to maintain a neutral expression but he could hardly believe what he was hearing. What kind of educational video was this supposed to be?
James stood and watch as Dr Khatri continued to commentate as she began to slowly undress, from the safety of being behind the camera of course, while he was fully exposed to anyone who happened to watch this. How could he explain this if anyone he knew came across it? This was so unlike him. He never would have dreamed of being naked on film, let alone performing a sex act. He hated the thought that anyone could be watching this at any time and he would have no way of knowing.
I want you to concentrate fully on James's penis. In fact I'm going to zoom in now for you so you can see it in perfect detail. James' penis is slightly larger than average though unremarkable in size. At the moment it is flacid but soon you will watch it become fully erect. You can't see it but off screen I am undressing slowly. This will send James'body into a state of sexual arousal and it will prepare itself to procreate.
It was true, the doctor was undressing and, try as he might not to, James was indeed becoming aroused by it. He hated this, he knew his genitals were being zoomed in on and recorded during this most intimate of bodily functions. His full body and face had been in shot moments earlier and Dr Khatri was even using his real name in the commentary. He couldn't believe he was doing this. And as he inevitably began to get hard things only got worse.
There you are, can you see what is happening to James's penis? It is starting to harden and grow. And look at his scrotum, the skin is tightening and his testicles are rising and swelling as he gets harder still. Now look, as he reaches a full erection you can see the head of his penis getting wider. He will be feeling around the area between his testicles and anus now. His heart rate increasing, his blood pressure is rising, his breathing is becoming quicker, and his thighs and buttocks are tightening. Look how different his penis looks now, so big and hard and you can see it throbbing a little. James is getting close to orgasm now but, as he will not be able to inset it into a vagina, he will need to touch himself to do that. I am going to zoom out now so we can watch James masturbate to ejaculation.
Try as he might not to, James eventually gave in to the base desires that the doctor was triggering in him and did what came naturally, first touching his dick, then stroking it then gripping it and tugging harder and faster. There was no commentary now, no attempt at passing this off as an educational video. James was naked and jacking off on camera in exchange for Viagra he clearly didn't need.
James could feel himself reaching the point of no return. James realised this video was degrading enough already, but did he really want his imminent ejaculation to be captured on camera for posterity? For the doctor to show to anyone she wished. This was going to make the artistic full frontal nude shots of him at the bookstore, which he also desperately hoped would never see the light of day, look tame in comparison.
Pre-cum was dribbling out of James's penis now. The real stuff was sure to follow soon. He hadn't been provided with a tissue, a rag or even a sock. He was just going to have to go all over himself and the examination table.
Suddenly James felt an intense wave of pleasure enveloping him, quickly followed by several hefty spurts of gooey whitish grey liquid jetting out of his penis and landing mostly on his thighs and in his pubic hair. He sighed with exhaustion. It was done, he had starred in a video he never would have dreamed of making had it not been for the extremely bizarre circumstances he found himself trapped in.
"I think that went very well" Dr Khatri commended James as she printed out the prescription he required "It should be a very useful learning resource for my students. I may even watch it myself tonight"
"Can I have something to clean myself up please?" James asked as he got down from the table.
"No" Dr Khatri answered bluntly "But I'm sure you can buy some wet wipes in the chemists next door when you take your prescription there."