The Last Straw (new 4/15)

[perseus]

I too would like to know you plan by reading the next chapter

[student]

" I even have a plan for old, great-uncle Herbert, may he soon rest in peace." (neverdoubted)

Great Uncle Herbert has a Fotomat?

Better yet, Great Uncle Herbert is a professional photographer with his own portrait studio and has an assistant who does hair and make-up for glamor and figure studies?

[neverdoubted]

" I even have a plan for old, great-uncle Herbert, may he soon rest in peace." (neverdoubted)

Great Uncle Herbert has a Fotomat?

Better yet, Great Uncle Herbert is a professional photographer with his own portrait studio and has an assistant who does hair and make-up for glamor and figure studies?

Not even close

[student]

Neverdoubted: "Not even close"

Can't win 'em all--but I'll count it as a win when Chapter 7 posts.

[jojo12026]

This story is delicious. Can't wait for next part!

[mikewozere]

Looking forward to the next installment.
Even wearing a jacket, Mary will struggle to climb/crawl without revealing herself to other members of the public I imagine

[perseus]

Can we hope for an update soon?

[neverdoubted]

Maybe tomorrow. Stay tuned.

[Freesub]

I'm never not tuned! It's a daily habit to check now

[TwoWeeksAway]

This is a thrilling story that keeps the reader engaged from beginning to end. The pacing is perfect, and the unique concept makes it stand out from other stories in this genre. The characters are complex and well-developed, which makes even the most unbelievable events seem realistic and entertaining.

There's so much potential for excitement and danger during this underground exploration, and one idea for the plot could be for our protagonist to get caught wearing the jacket, resulting in an embarrassing punishment that the narrator is invited to witnesses.