This may change the game..audiobook for After School Brawl by Nikolai

[Nikolai]

https://www.mboxdrive.com/after-school.mp3


Found an app to make audio books for the stories and a somewhat realistic (id go as far to say provacative) narrator. Not everything translates over (for example 5'8) reads 5 apostrophe 8 instead of 5, 8 or five foot 8) but I feel like if a story was made with this in mind and especially a more first person story that this could be really something for this forum. Let me know what you guys think. Should I make more does anyone have a story (preferably first person) in mind. I may make some more with my stories or my next stories(lots of ideas but little time) I really enjoyed this thought you all might as well(its long so fast forward a bit if bored)

[blueballs]

Its a nice idea, however i couldn't really get into it.. Voice is too monotone.. Ended up just re reading it instead haha.. Such a great story though personal favourite for me. Be great to see more storoes from you!

[Nikolai]

Its a nice idea, however i couldn't really get into it.. Voice is too monotone.. Ended up just re reading it instead haha.. Such a great story though personal favourite for me. Be great to see more storoes from you!

Thats fair, I found that It made gave the more descriptive parts and some of the dailogue a little extra than just reading it and loved the premise, the formatting was a bit off with certain parts not coming through how they should have but overall I found it kind of interesting, I'd love to see something like this with a more realistic voice maybe and maybe created or formatted to be read off smoother by the narrator. Just interesting to hear it read out because lord knows ill never have a video of it played out. I may look a little further into improving this although I'm not going to waste to much time on it.

That being said, I really enjoy the compliments and I'm honored its your personal favorite. I have lots of ideas stiring around but haven't had time to sit down and work on anything. Hoping that changes soon. I had story ideas for the last two contests and didn't get to them in time maybe I'll put out a poll for a couple of the ideas I have and that will force me to commit to the favorite lol. Thanks for the feedback ill see if I can improve something like this but that shouldn't interfere with another story hopefully coming soon.

[Nikolai]

Its a nice idea, however i couldn't really get into it.. Voice is too monotone.. Ended up just re reading it instead haha.. Such a great story though personal favourite for me. Be great to see more storoes from you!

Also idk if you liked sammys lesson as much but hopefully soon im gonna try to finish that or further it because I liked where I was going but I slipped a little off the rails and got called out for it and that kind of discouraged me because I wasn't going where the commenter was thinking but it made me feel like it was a little to much or something. All of this shit comes off the top of my head and often times when I finally sit down to write, I write whole stories or multiple chapters at once and sometimes I post them before I even proofread. I know my stories are a little more on the darker side of this niche but I hope you all enjoy them the last thing im ever trying to do is make someone uncomfortable or take it to far, ik this niche of a fetish kinda rides a fine line of alot of things

[Girlspns]

I do believe there is merit in the idea, I'm a fan of fan-made and indie works in Japan (mostly of the pornographic and erotic nature), and I do notice a trend of hiring an actress to act out an erotic script in audio of her either performing or making you perform (if you're an ENM fan) erotic acts.

For instance, a girl makes a bet with you and as a result acts out and voices her attempts to, say, streak the park in the middle of the night, how she feels and how embarrassed she is, panicking when a noise is made, etc.

And while I might be biased, I often find that side of the pond is more adept at making that sort of content than here, so they may be on to something.

[blueballs]

Its a nice idea, however i couldn't really get into it.. Voice is too monotone.. Ended up just re reading it instead haha.. Such a great story though personal favourite for me. Be great to see more storoes from you!

Also idk if you liked sammys lesson as much but hopefully soon im gonna try to finish that or further it because I liked where I was going but I slipped a little off the rails and got called out for it and that kind of discouraged me because I wasn't going where the commenter was thinking but it made me feel like it was a little to much or something. All of this shit comes off the top of my head and often times when I finally sit down to write, I write whole stories or multiple chapters at once and sometimes I post them before I even proofread. I know my stories are a little more on the darker side of this niche but I hope you all enjoy them the last thing im ever trying to do is make someone uncomfortable or take it to far, ik this niche of a fetish kinda rides a fine line of alot of things

Yeah, I did it was great would be great to see that one continued. Shouldn't get to discouraged about appealing for everybody Its just fetish fiction its not going to appeal to everybody